Shoelaces - Comments

I agree with William Ryden Leto.'s comment.

I like that, in this story, the untied shoelaces was like, for me, a symbol of their being free and careless with their life, but in a good way. And when, whoever it was, tied their shoelaces when the other left was some kind of closure and ending to their relationship. I like it so much because it shows that they were still young when it happened, and that means they couldn't have known what they were getting themselves into, but I think the other one did, and he was serious about it.

Ngee :D

That was simply beautiful. You went from love to heartbreak in such a short space but I felt the full effect of both emotions. The last paragraph really got me.

That was simply amazing. I loved it!
Good job, it was so realistic and your writing is lovely.

Beautiful, as usual. I love it.

That was so special. You have a way to make the profound subtle and keep a emotion forever lasting. I picture all of your pieces shot from funny angles like just under the eyes and over thier heads. The idea that you can tell alot about something even from a small perspective seems to be a constant idea in your pieces.

I don't know how you do it, but you sure do.

Honestly, Dru, your drabbles are like epic stories all on their own.
I really like the way that you write. It makes the stories seem so realistic already, like I'm starting to get confused if Ryan and Brendon really knew each other when they were younger or not. :))
You've got an amazing talent with words and bringing your characters to life.
I'm jealous.
I could only wish for something like that.
But anyways,
I like that, in this story, the untied shoelaces was like, for me, a symbol of their being free and careless with their life, but in a good way. And when, whoever it was, tied their shoelaces when the other left was some kind of closure and ending to their relationship. I like it so much because it shows that they were still young when it happened, and that means they couldn't have known what they were getting themselves into, but I think the other one did, and he was serious about it.

It's a really beautiful drabble, Dru. You're the master Ryden, srsly.
I just wish you'd continue most, if not all, of your chaptered stories. Because they're to die for, really. I'd read your stories over and over again if I could, and memorize every line you wrote.

I love your stories. ;____; Hell, I love you. XD

Heartbreaking, in the best way possible.
Absolutely beautiful.

NNNGH. Woah. This, this completely ruined my ability to write a proper comment.

It was like a punch in the stomach reading that last line (in a good way, of course).

Another prompt story.
The prompt is summer.
> 400 words.
Ryan and Brendon's relationship in four paragraphs and a sentence.

Happy reading!

xoxox
-Dru