December 30th, 2009 at 07:42am
The layout of this was such that the right hand margin was just on the edge of the text. I'm not sure if this was just because of my browser, but it made it difficult to read.
I also didn't get at first that I was reading the actual letter, since there was no introduction or 'Dear X,', nor any other text to contrast the font with. That may well be because I am a sloppy reader, but I find that it is always best to err on the side of clarity.
That all said, I think you have a fairly solid introduction here, and I am certainly curious as to how this will turn out. And that, I suppose, is the true measure of good writing.
*walks away*
*yells back*
I LOVE IT!
IT'S A RYDON BUT I LOVE IT!