Can't You Help Me as I'm Starting to Burn? - Comments

D: Oh my god. That broke my heartjgklhfgjgjhklgkg, as lame as that sounds. ):

But heeeey, this plan is fail-proof. They need each other, really.
<3

only ONE more chapter!?!? Gah, i don't want it to end! but i suppose all good things must come to an end eh?
I really hope they get back together...i really do

so sad to hear about it ONE CHAPTER LEFT but so excited to read it, I so hope that the plan works, and Nate and Ash can get together..they are so cute

Aww thats so sad. I kind of feel bad for Nate now. Maybe Ash doesnt understand how drunk
Nate was. Ash should drink a bunch and then see if HE can tell ppl apart!! I
Wonder what the plan to win him back is... This was a fantastic chapter! It really showed their emotions.

I love this story!!!!!!!!!
Please update it soon?!?!?!?!?!

Ahh i hope Nate wins him back, i can't stand Ash being like this xD

Please say theres gonna be a sequal? ;D

I do agree that he shouldn't have cheated.
But things like that do happen when you're drunk.
I wouldn't know personally.
Anyways, I hope they get back together.
They need to be together.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO I FDON'T WANT IT TO ENDD!!!!!! will there be a sequal??

aww i hope they get back together.. i don't wanan cry over these two again :(

One chapter? ):
Should make a sequal. :D

That sucks.
I know what it's like when you're drunk too, you sometimes don't realise what you're doing, or you do but something stops you from stopping it.
Never been blind drunk though. Kinda glad of it.

No! Not one chapter left?! Are you serious?! This is too amazing, does it have to end? *pouts*

I can't believe how much of a wreak they both are...
Ash...well he's just destroyed...but then Nate's the same...
They need each other! They need to know this!

More soon please?

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!
I cant believe that Nate cheated on Ash!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please update soon?!?!?!?!?!

I can't be angry at Nate. >.< That would make me a hypocrite.
People all look the same when ur drunk.
XpeaceX

I do believe that is a face to palm kind of moment there.

love to this story

Nooo! that was unexpected, how could that happen to poor Ash?! But it was a really good chapter i loved it, although i can't believe its almost over >.<

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ys it almsot over!! wahhhhhhh :'(

is this the exact end u had planned form the begining, or him cheating and you sjtu didn't know the circumstances?

THEY better END UP TOGETHR!!plz for the sake of my sanity:( let them be togethr.. UPDATE SOON PLZZZ!

Noooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!! Stupid stupid stupid retarted evil fucked up NATE!!!! No no noooooo! How could he?!!! I think he would hav noticed it was a freaking girl!! I wonder wat Ash's reaction will be. Nate has alot of apologizing to do and I think Ash needs to see the tape, although that might make him even madder!!! Wow that ch. Was exciting!! I cant wait 2 see what happens next :D

it felt a little rushed...
but still good :)
*slaps nate*

Shit.
Just... shiit.