In Fate's Hands - Comments

Kaedyn and Keegan :/
they annoy me. weak little piece of shits.

He's even letting me comment!
I swear.
Chance is a fucking warden. >.<
Uhhh. He's reading over my shoulder...I meant to say that your a fucking...God.
That's right.
I just promoted my boyfriend to God status.
But enough about me.

The twins?
I was shaking with glee, until they lose the brotherly love thing, and go for 'you can fuck him...'
Some brothers.
I adored this. <3
Just so you know. ;D

Hmm..
I like this, :)

I like this.. a lot :'D
Only Kaedyn And Keegan are dicks :/
how can they let their "friend" tease his little brother like that.

Heyyy, new subber right hereee♥

This is a really good story, I really like the progression thus far. You have little to no errors and I comprehend your writing very well.

I enjoy the plot and can't wait to continue reading this series :)♥

If you don't update soon...
I'll...
I'll...
I don't know what I'll do...But it won't be good.
O.O

There was a third chapter?
How did my update senses not tingle until now?
Eh.
Either way...
I enjoyed how you didn't make a huge lemon out of Ethan fucking Riley's brother.
That would've been weird. o.o
In an amusing way.
It's strange. The story's on chapter 3, and I can already see where this might be going. Yet...
I'm still incredibly excited for the next chapter.
So get on that.
Kay. Bye.
P.s. Ethan's a dick...so why do I like his character so much? xD

Hehe.
Someone agrees with me.
I feel special. I won't let it go to my head, I promise.
So...
I posted on your wall, and them IMMEDIATLEY noticed that you'd updated...So I ran off to read it...
And I loved it.
Nick and Ian are cute.
I wish I had a muffin right now, damn you....
I haven't had a muffin in months...

Update as soon as you can -pressurepressurepressure- ...
Kay.
Bye.

Haha, I agree with the first comment<3
Nice story though
I can't wait for more.

Oooooh.
Do I get the first comment?
That's exciting.

I don't usually read original fictions, dunno why....
But I have insomnia, and I couldn't find a good band fic, so I clicked on stories, and told myself I'd read the first thing that popped up...

And it was this.

I really liked it. You didn't try to introduce too many characters too fast, which was helpful, since my most common problem with Original Fiction is the number of characters. I just stick with band fics, 'cause then I at least know who people are, but you were good about that, and the pictures helped fit the whole thing together. Thanks.

I like the twist, that the big school bully's gay. It's cool.

Anywhosits, I'm subscribing, and you had BETTER update soon. <3

-Jinna