I know this is old, but your writing is timeless. I don't know when you'll get this message, since I don't know how often you visit Mibba, but I figured I'd try to relive the good old days of when we used to comment each others' stories. God, it's been so long. I'm almost 20 and I can feel my wrinkles wrinkling! LMAO
Anyway, I was in the mood for some Sara-ness.
It's amazing to me how you can blur the emotions so much in this to where you don't know which of them is the bad guy. I recall being mad at Frankie in It's Not A Mistake. Now I'm angry with Gerard. You have an incredible writing ability that enables you to manipulate your readers' emotions.
You know you have genuine talent when someone still yearns for your writing after 3 years.
Haha, I haven't been on Mibba in ages and I can't believe this isn't finished yet. That's actually quite amusing lol. I wrote a mini novel in the time it's taken you to do this haha.
OMG this story is amazing. you're writing style has changed so much in this one compared to It's Not a Mistake If You Always Repeat It, thats my opinion anyways. =] sorry i didn't comment earlier! you deserve more comments!
:shock: i knew he was going to to try to drown himself as soon as water was mentioned.......:sad: gerard really needs to get over Riley's death.....he needs to move on
This chapter was fucking amazing!! And I can't wait for the next! You're just teasing us with your making us wait so long for each new update! It's not fair!!
..and what a fabulous update is it! I don't think I've commented too many times on this story- not lately anyways, but Gawd! Needless to say; I love it.
In this chapter I especially love the sense of liberty you created when Gerard would just stand out in the rain and just lets himself. I can't even describe it, but anyways. Good job. :]]
I'm gonna go cry. Gerard Way fucks everything up in EVERY story I've read today. And so does Frank. They both suck, okay? I can't even belive I am saying this, but they ruin themselves. Gay kids. -eyeroll-
Anyway, I was in the mood for some Sara-ness.
It's amazing to me how you can blur the emotions so much in this to where you don't know which of them is the bad guy. I recall being mad at Frankie in It's Not A Mistake. Now I'm angry with Gerard. You have an incredible writing ability that enables you to manipulate your readers' emotions.
You know you have genuine talent when someone still yearns for your writing after 3 years.
YOUUUU, my dear, are awesomely fantastic. <3