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He Calls a Mansion, Not a House, but a Tomb - Comments
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LOVE THIS!!! Can it keep going!?March 11th, 2014 at 09:51pm
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Love it <3 please update soon :)
Gerard needs to get past his disorder thingie and be with Frank :)December 4th, 2012 at 08:47am -
Comment swap!
I don't listen to My Chemical Romance but this is great. The description is so detailed and well thought out. This story is very intriguing. It really leaves me want even more. Awesome job!June 30th, 2012 at 09:04am -
You have no idea how much I love this story
May 29th, 2012 at 09:52am -
I love this story its great and it's nice to see a different Frerard :)
but make sure to separate your paragraphs so it's easier for the readers to read.
EX) The man chuckled, his teeth revealing their pearly white selves. I smiled.
He looked at me and I felt my cheeks burn like mad. I looked out the window.
For about 20 minutes, we played this game of "see-no-see" until the man pulled the stop request cord.
I frowned, but stood up and held onto the balance pole. I wanted to observe this man further.
Hopefully this helps :)
Great story line so keep up the work :)May 29th, 2012 at 12:23am -
I was so happy when I got an email saying you updated :D thank you. This chapter was sad, I feel bad for Gerard and especially for Frank. I hope they work this out somehow.
Hope to hear from you again. Thanks again for the update.May 28th, 2012 at 07:32pm -
I was so happy when I got an email saying you updated :D thank you. This chapter was sad, I feel bad for Gerard and especially for Frank. I hope they work this out somehow.
Hope to hear from you again. Thanks again for the update.May 28th, 2012 at 07:32pm -
Have you left us? :( I was really enjoying this story. I hope you update soon.May 2nd, 2012 at 06:11am
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I love this story so much it should be a fucking crime, I saw u updated and i was like 'O.O must.....read...'
Update soon! (:September 27th, 2011 at 12:38pm -
DUN DUN DUN. hi new reader! MEMORIES COME FLOODIGN BACK FOR FRANK AND HE'S HITTING GERARD! Why I wrote that caps in don't know. I just did. Anywyas. I need and update! Thanks! ;)September 20th, 2011 at 03:36am
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Whats going on?
Why did Frank actually attack Gerard?
Is it cuz Gerards a cheater?
Eh?
I dont know...
I WANT A CUPCAKE!!!
But I also want an update....
UPDATE SOON PLEASEEE <33September 19th, 2011 at 05:41am -
OH PENIS!!!!!September 18th, 2011 at 06:50am
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whoo! finally a new chapter!
just gotta comment on one thing though.....
how can Frank have pushed Gerard off the bed with his feet after "pulling his knees up to his chest" if his leg is hurt & he can barely move it....? as soon as he did it he would be in extreme pain....
or maybe thats just me reading too much into it, idk i coud be wrong. but just thought i'd askSeptember 18th, 2011 at 02:18am -
You wrote these characters perfectly!May 28th, 2011 at 08:44am
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PAGE CLAIM!!!May 2nd, 2011 at 01:28am
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Just started this and got to ch19, now... I WANT MORE -pout-
And Gee is a douche.May 2nd, 2011 at 01:28am -
ugh, i can barely stand him.April 30th, 2011 at 02:58am
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I reallly like this story. update soon? please?
that'd make my day(:
Gerard being a naughty naught boyyApril 24th, 2011 at 04:18am -
This rocks :) I want more. Please update? Chapter 19 next :D I gotta write here where I left off in case I forget. :PApril 7th, 2011 at 03:33am
Sorry I got lost in school and other stories --- I've got about half of the next chapter ready, though :)