June 25th, 2010 at 05:58pm
I liked this though it scared me for a second since I'd just commented on one of yours with the same banner.
Anyways, I liked it but just like the other it was sad.
I think I prefered the other though, but this was pretty good too.
I agree with lonna for the layout colors.
It's difficult to read.
The majority of this story was quite good. Like said above me a few comments the ending could've been more definite, but it was good. I felt like the ending was kind of...blah. Like oh! it's over now, kay bye. You know what I mean?
But otherwise goodjob.