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  • gerardwaylover93

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    ok! I will read!
    October 13th, 2007 at 09:09am
  • nightmare_frankie

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    MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and I finished my story I updated the last chapter today!
    October 12th, 2007 at 09:19am
  • gerardwaylover93

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    soon will be more!!!!
    October 12th, 2007 at 04:32am
  • just-a-lie

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    omg, i wonder where it goes, i hope theyre okay
    more soon please
    October 12th, 2007 at 12:48am
  • gerardwaylover93

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    ok ok ok!!!
    October 11th, 2007 at 06:15am
  • nightmare_frankie

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    DUDE WTF? UPDATE ASAP!
    October 11th, 2007 at 05:29am
  • gerardwaylover93

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    ok will update soon!
    September 30th, 2007 at 04:31am
  • red_knives

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    hey great story!
    i just read it!
    update soon
    September 29th, 2007 at 05:49am
  • lake effect kid.;;

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    I'm rude. Kill me.

    But I couldn't force myself to read more than 6 chapters.

    First of all, you should make a new paragraph. It's hurting my eyes the way you write right now.

    You go way to fast with the storyline, at least too fast for me. It was strange, he comes to her by wonder and asks her out. I just think it's odd.

    Running from the cops in the woods? I mean, running from the cops when... as I understood... they were next to you?

    Oh, and... use " when they speak please, I saw you put ' too. You don't really describe anything that happens - you know, what they talk , it's so fast for me. I can't imagine the places they are in.

    I just don't know how to say it.

    And please don't all shout at me. I'm expressing my oppinion.

    And by the way.

    It's my first rude comment *blushes*. I'm usually a nice person.
    September 29th, 2007 at 05:18am
  • just-a-lie

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    omg wow i cant wait to find out what happens next!
    September 28th, 2007 at 04:47am
  • gerardwaylover93

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    i know! i hoping to update tomarrow
    maybe tonight......... Dance
    September 27th, 2007 at 08:58am
  • neon filth.

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    Ooo so very good! I cant wait to find out what happens next!
    September 27th, 2007 at 08:15am
  • gerardwaylover93

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    i will soon!
    September 27th, 2007 at 05:50am
  • neon filth.

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    Its very good so far! I like the plot. I'll subscribe, so please update soon! =]
    September 27th, 2007 at 04:20am
  • just-a-lie

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    oooh first comment
    great story!
    more soon please:) :D
    September 27th, 2007 at 04:02am