This was brilliant! Honestly, I think this was an incredible story and it made me smile reading it. Your description is beautiful and the way you wrote it made me feel as if I was right there with Roxie.
I especially liked this bit: fighting against the claws of the hook in her shattered heart.
I could never come up with something as beautiful as that sentence up there. It fitted well and the recurring theme of Isaac's hooks was just amazing.
You have an amazing style of writing and that story was just ... wow.
I especially liked this bit: fighting against the claws of the hook in her shattered heart.
I could never come up with something as beautiful as that sentence up there. It fitted well and the recurring theme of Isaac's hooks was just amazing.
You have an amazing style of writing and that story was just ... wow.
I have nothing bad to say about it. So there.
Good luck in the contest! <3