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  • lindsaiirose

    lindsaiirose (100)

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    Somethings that might help with how the story looks now is:
    When there's dialouge push enter so there's space between the taking, it looks nicer.
    And when there's new paragraphs also push enter so it's not all crammed together.
    (:
    -Lindsayy.
    November 24th, 2009 at 01:55pm
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    awhh, this is nice.
    i like it.
    November 24th, 2009 at 01:49pm
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