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  • Demonfreak

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    Woo! Update! :DD
    Glad you're able to write again. I missed this story.
    I really like that last chapter, too. So much imagery with the dandelion; absolutely beautiful writing.
    March 13th, 2010 at 05:05am
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    Gahhh, cliffhanger...
    But so so so goood :D
    My friend had a house like that. They're terrifying.
    December 3rd, 2009 at 04:16am
  • Demonfreak

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    That jerk! :O
    Can't wait to see where this goes..
    Also, I like that you mentioned the stereotype that all "rockers" are hardcore druggies. People always think I'm a druggie, even though I'm the farthest thing from it.
    November 29th, 2009 at 10:07pm
  • AS.I.LAY.DYING

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    this is better than the other one it gives you an idea of what she goes through........this really is amazzing it is insightful, and very easy to understand.
    November 28th, 2009 at 10:51pm
  • Demonfreak

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    Love the update =)
    It really seems as if it were seen through her eyes, not like in a story where the voice doesn't match the character. Also, I'm glad that you gave a bit more insight on her mom.
    November 28th, 2009 at 09:31pm
  • Demonfreak

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    I am in love with this. :3
    Jordan effing owns! Haha, I love her.
    The way you write this is like through the eyes of a teenager, yet still deeply poetic.
    And it's deeply poetic, yet still has me laughing out loud.
    Please don't ever stop writing this.
    November 27th, 2009 at 07:14am
  • DreamMakerLoveTaker

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    I really like this, its so insightful :) please keep it up! x
    November 25th, 2009 at 04:42pm
  • Flightless Bird

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    I love this story. it is so creative and I cant wait to read more.
    November 24th, 2009 at 08:41pm
  • Mediocre Conspiracy

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    Hey i love the story! Especially the title.
    I think it makes it more realistic when you add the side-thoughts.
    When i moved from Brooklyn to Texas. It was pretty much the same thing for me.
    November 24th, 2009 at 06:04pm