The Other Part of Me - Comments

new chapter =] update soon please!!!!!

Cool Beans :D
stupid Lyssa's mum xD
Update whenever you can :)

Lyssa's mom is pyschotic eh? lol
greeat update!

haha, i liked this chapter, but it seemed like kinda like a time filler, ya know, just gettting the chapter out.

OMG! They way Desi answered the phone made me laugh so hard. It was amazing.
Loved the update. =D Can't wait for more.

:) loved it!

haha, i totally get the gelato ice cream thing, I LOOOOVE gelato!! haha, anyways, i like this chapter, although i think that lil should have gone through with the tat, otherrwise, its -------- that close to being pointless, except for that last part......

Awww Lil and Paul are so cute!! Love them together
can't wait for more

haha this chapter is good, but why exactly are they going to a club, anyways???? i wouldnt think of that as something that they would do.

Warning this comment will be shit.
Great updates im so drained right now and My vocab wont work right :/
Update? <3

Ahhhh! yay! Loved it. And glad you're back hun <3 =D

Can't wait for more.

Its pretty good, but i dont get the last part, the last 2 sentences, it might be just me, oh! its cliff diving, isnt it??? Paul and Lil are going cliff diving, i bet. yah, i like it.

Yes it was worth the wait!!
Oohhh they're going clubbing!!! That's exciting!!!
Can't wait for more.

Alright. . .My turn Bitches!!!

Woah!!
This story is AWESOME!!
I love it! And the story line? Oh emmm gee!!
I can't wait for the next update!!
Wooh!!
I love it, I love it, I love it!!

~Fireball!! Rawr!!!~

it's okay that it was short. :)
i still love the story.
update soon!

good update

Wooo! Girl's night! Makes me smile. Can't wait for more!

i really like this chapter, i know you had to do a spur of the moment kind of thing! its really good. why doesnt jeremy like jake??? cuz hes dating Desi????? course, that is the sort of thing that would be going on in a fathers head! haha i loved it, even though iti was short

What, NO UPDATES?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Seriously i need something to brighten my mood at the minute since i'm on the verge of stupid frustrated tears but whatever! Update soooooooooonnnnnNNn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The sad teddy, star, has spoken... =(