Keep the Pain Away. . . - Comments

  • TrIkK BaBiI

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    Oh em gee!!
    HEY!! School better be in the next chapter, damnit!!
    Rawr! <3 lol
    Update soon!!

    <3 Kit Kat
    December 6th, 2009 at 09:38pm
  • debzxxx

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    lovin the story :)
    December 6th, 2009 at 12:12pm
  • skaterbabe17

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    this is really damn good. your a really good writer. im gonna put mine up here so u should check it out too! :)
    December 6th, 2009 at 02:38am
  • TrIkK BaBiI

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    Awesome update!!
    Can't wait for the next chapter!!

    <3 Kit Kat
    December 5th, 2009 at 06:12pm
  • MissKrissy90

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    Awwh,
    I LOVE SLUSHIES!
    AHH!
    AND THIS CHAPTER (:
    Please keep updating! ;)
    December 5th, 2009 at 03:25am
  • debzxxx

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    its really good :-)
    December 4th, 2009 at 06:47am
  • colormethechaos123

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    this story is nottt suckkyy!!!! just thnk about what direction you want it to go in and what you want to happen! it will all work out i know it cause your a really good writer! lol
    December 4th, 2009 at 03:35am
  • TrIkK BaBiI

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    Dude!!! She should totally go to public school!!
    And I think that choice A should be Zeeva!!
    And dude. . .You TOTALLY need to put me with Paul!!
    OOOOOHHH, and CHERRY BERRY SLUSHIES ARE THE SHYT BYTCH!!!

    <3 Kit Kat
    December 4th, 2009 at 03:09am
  • colormethechaos123

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    thank you for mentioning me! im glad to help! i really love this story! it has so much emotion but romance at the same time...and i love how zeeva is a badass!
    umm if zeeva goes to public schools it could help create more to the plot because she could find a friend and enemy however it could make ur story more dramatic....home schooling will have less plot but it will help balance out the drama....idk if this helps but i tried! lol good luck! i can't wait for the next chapter!
    December 1st, 2009 at 04:47am
  • unbroken13

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    I like choice A.
    I think she should go to a public school.

    I really love the story. I cannot wait for more! I am going to subscribe.
    November 30th, 2009 at 10:59pm
  • debzxxx

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    i think she should go to a public school :)
    urgh! i hate kyle! lol O_O
    i <3 inkheart!!! that book rox :)
    great updatex
    November 30th, 2009 at 11:51am
  • MissKrissy90

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    I loved the update! (:
    Personally I like C!
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    Good choice in my opinion!
    Hehe!
    Keep on writing !
    November 30th, 2009 at 07:25am
  • tangerinesky

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    Oh wow, this story is so well-written !
    And, amazing of course ! (:
    Update soon, please <3
    November 30th, 2009 at 07:15am
  • debzxxx

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    cool update :)
    i think... option A is pretty good :D
    November 30th, 2009 at 07:11am
  • Becka Vengeance

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    Haha I loved the new chapter =] it was sooooo good. Update soon?
    November 30th, 2009 at 05:54am
  • SunshineCivalization

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    Only on chapter two and I already love it. :]
    November 30th, 2009 at 05:45am
  • colormethechaos123

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    i love this story! and its not too mushy its just right! lol
    November 30th, 2009 at 04:25am
  • vivre.rire.l'amour!

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    Love it! keep updating it!!!!!
    November 30th, 2009 at 02:57am
  • Becka Vengeance

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    I looove this story, you have to keep it cuz if you dont, I will cryyy. Awesomenessss.
    Oh, and Monster is AMAZINGGGGGGG!!!!!!!
    *subscribes*
    November 30th, 2009 at 12:56am
  • MissKrissy90

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    I love this!
    (:
    JACOB IS SO SEXY!
    Please update soon!
    :D
    November 29th, 2009 at 06:12pm