Loba - Comments

i love it, there's hardly ever any she-wolf stories out there!
i bet jacob imprinted on her!
What exactly is her mission?
please update again soon!!

This is by far the best written Jacob Black story I have seen, the plot flows really well, and it doesn't jump around to the point you get confused as to what is going on. I'm really excited to see where the story ends up going, and what ends up happening with Jacob and Rayna I believe her name was. :] Hopefully you update this soon, I cannot wait to read what happens next.

I am really liking this story so far and I hope you can update it soon :)

I just caught up on this one. I'm DYING to know what they're up to!

that is good. keep writing!

I'm glad your exams went good. As for me, they moved the exams date till the first week of March, lucky me.
I totally understand Leah's reactions, so much smarter than the males.Excellent chapter by the way and don't over work yourself with too many stories, but kudos actually getting inspirations for new stories. I'm lacking of that so... (writer's block is still partly intact for me)

I can understand Leah's reaction and I have a funny feeling she's going to say 'I told you so' at some point!
Loved it hun, looking forward to more! :)
And Whoop for new Brian stories XD - looking forward to those :D But can I ask about Haunted? Are you continuing with it? :)

aww poor leah =( i dont like rayne!!lol, glad ur exams went good though!

OH! Ho ho :D
I loved the new chapter, I hope you update soon
and o_O...I made Leah too nice in mine T_T

XD

cc:
Awesome chick.
Do we know if Jake imprinted on her?
<3

wow, suprised by how much i like it so far.
it's confusing since i don't really know whats going on,
i get the vide theyr going to eat jacobs pack. i dont know why but i do.
but anyway, i like your writing style, and this story so far
hope you don't lose any inspiration to write

Great update.
Even though I hate that Leah got dissed a little.
I can't wait to find out more about Rayna.

Never seen a Jacob fan fiction story like this. Grabbed me with the first chapter and pulled me to the current last update. You made the character's personality seems perfect to how Stephanie Meyer has created them. I love the plot and the mysterious airs of Loba. This story seems to be getting very exciting soon. Brilliant work, definately going to check out your other works. Brilliant! - Unknown

For once, I'm on Leah's side. I feel so bad for her.

Great update! XD

Good update.

Poor Leah though.
I'd have to kick Sam's ass for being so mean to her.
Cause she has a point! Leah should totally fight Rayna.

Can't wait for more to read, love it!

its amazing

Damn, I really loved this! And, ohh, a betrayal is near! O_o
Oh dear. Can't wait for more! =D

Okay, so I'm going to take a guess and say that Rayna's pack wants to kill off Sam so that his pack is going to be uncoordinated when her pack invades La Push and starts to attack them and whatnot. But they don't know that Jacob is the Beta so if anything should ever happen to Sam, then he would be the leader. So their plan goes down the drain. Then again, I could be wrong.

Loving this story.

What is Rayna's plan?

The baby thing was really cute.
=)

Ahhh plot twist! ahahaha.

Great chapter(: