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War-Worn Harlot (150)

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Haha that's okay! Yeah it is kind of an awkward scene to write. Thanks for the comment! :]

ps: I like your icon :]

November 21st, 2007 at 06:38am

the god of thunder. (300)

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I honestly have no idea how you should write that scene. xD I'm such an amazing help to you. But really, the start is good, and it's going to run into something good too, I just know it. I just don't know what it should be.

Sorry, I suck at helping others in their stories!

November 20th, 2007 at 09:30am

the god of thunder. (300)

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In response to your comment, no problem. You deserve it. Like, it's hard for me to read without getting jealous of your writing skills. But at the same time my respects go way up. So, good job, again.

Ugh, I would be creeped out of my mind if looked over and saw myself in a tux, staring back at me. Heh, I bet I'd cry then fill out the applications for that mental institution. Either that or make best friend with my other self. *Big grin.*

October 29th, 2007 at 06:33am

War-Worn Harlot (150)

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War Worn Lipstick:
I swear, watching that video gave me the whole feeling of reading The Shining over again >> Actually, that was a pretty good bopok, Stephen King is an amazing writer. Haha I think this story might get me more hooked on 30 Seconds To Mars than I have been.

Anyways, you're writing the line to the music video better than the video actually was. Which is a HUGE compliment, because that's pretty rare to see. I also liked how you chose to write THIS video, it's definetly something that'll keep me reading for a long time.

So =] dun dun dunnn.... Update soon! =D

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!

October 28th, 2007 at 10:32am

the god of thunder. (300)

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I swear, watching that video gave me the whole feeling of reading The Shining over again >> Actually, that was a pretty good book, Stephen King is an amazing writer. Haha I think this story might get me more hooked on 30 Seconds To Mars than I have been.

Anyways, you're writing the line to the music video better than the video actually was. Which is a HUGE compliment, because that's pretty rare to see. I also liked how you chose to write THIS video, it's definetly something that'll keep me reading for a long time.

So =] dun dun dunnn.... Update soon! =D

October 14th, 2007 at 02:07pm