this story was just amazing! i couldn't stop reading it. i rly wish you wrote a sequel, cause you're such a talented writer and made pice of great plot! it was pleasure to read your story.
i just finished reading this, and holy shit! this was probably one of the most amazing fanfics i had ever read! it's honestly good enough to be an actual book, and i wouldn't be suprised if this could get actually published, changing some names and such around.
OMG I loved this. The story line just kept me hanging, I've not slept since finding this story. You are such an amazing writer. I made me laugh how you made Sheffield seem... less sketchy. It made me feel a little bit safer in my home city of good old Sheffield.
Anyway, I was a little sad at first when I saw that Jona wasn't in the story, but then I remembered that he did start off with Bring me the horizon.
I loved the part with Brian... who is so Synyster Gates!... Am a right, or am I right. Anyway, I'm really glad that Flick and Oli are happy together. The ending was just perfect.
this is amazing. SO MANY DAMN FEELS. i loved the whole thing. the plot was great. The characters... how they develop , the dialogue it was fantastic. It all just painted a perfect picture in my mind of what you wrote. This is really unlike anything on here. plus it's so well written. I love it to bits and you did an incredible job. I really didn't want it to ever end. Perhaps maybe putting in a sequel? There are sooo many doors open for it. It's making me itch for it just thinking of it lol. Amyway.. I love this story.
So, I loved everything about this story. From the characters and their development to the plot line, the pacing and the conversations, everything was completely well done! It was so much fun to read and I didn't want it to end. I loved how believable the characters were and how true to them the dialogue was. I've never come across a story with this kind of storyline. It was so original! Besides a few grammatical errors, it was an absolute pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing it!
So first of all, I cannot express how much I love that you finished this. When you first lost interest in Oliver and whatnot, I thought you weren't going to finish the story and I got quite sad. I seriously love this story so so much and I'm way too glad you finished it. This has got to be one of my all time favorite stories. I feel like if you rewrote it as not fan-fiction, you could definitely get this published. And this would be an amazing book. I'd buy it for sure. This ending was just perfect. At the end of the previous chapter, I seriously stared at the computer for nearly 2 straight minutes yelling and saying "no, no that's not happening. No way. Don't even go there. No no". I was freaking out something fierce. And then I was almost in tears as I read through the very last chapter. I literally thought I was going to start crying, and that really rarely ever happens with anything I read. I just can't stress enough how in love with this story I am. It blows my mind in so many ways.
"“She then started dusting me. I fuckin’ promise yer Flick, I didn’t do anythin’ with ‘er. Why would I?”"
Why wouldn't you???
"“How can yer not tell?” He groaned, placing his forehead against mine. " Im melting away..
FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!
hehe!! I really love this story....always happy to see an email in my inbox...it was the last Oliver Sykes story I was reading cuz I got over him! haha
I can't say that a sequel would be right...I mean it would be too much...it was either get together on the honeymoon or not...so I'm really glad it's like this. Im satisfied with the ending.
I'm actually developing my own sequel for my Speed of Sound story...just wanted something to get me back into writing..and I already had a draft...so...I'll give a reading to your other stories too!