When a Good Cop Goes Bad - Comments

  • Zacky's Beotch

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    lord have mercy, you are fucking amazing at writing about fucking!
    May 2nd, 2010 at 10:57pm
  • KillLui

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    *thumbs up* XD
    Good God that was hot.
    January 9th, 2010 at 01:56am
  • ButterflyWarmth

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    Dear Lord, you sure know what you're doing! How should I say this....? You have got to be the Queen of smutt! I have no idea how you managed to pull off such an intense JC one-shot. Damn! I even have to admit that now I will never look at Johnny the same way. I'll probabaly be wetting my panties instead...^.^

    I love how she turned her anger and frustration into her sex drive. And just like that she turned naughty! Santa won't be too happy with her...^.^

    You know, sometimes I begin to think that you like Nuuba's v-neck idiot more than you let on. It's so suspicious. >.< Maybe you just agree with the fact that he's damn smexy, but just not your type? But then again you did get him on his knees.

    The ending was seriously amazing and extremely unexpected! It was all around amazing!
    November 30th, 2009 at 11:34pm
  • BriBriSexyTime

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    considering I'm sitting at work reading this when I should be sorting papers this was extremely hot and I don't read JC fanficion that often I give it 8 thumbs up
    November 28th, 2009 at 10:14pm
  • Vanima-Arwen

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    hahaah agreed with @mimmukkaa

    and like I said earlier "FIANCEEEE????" :P

    you saved it with the "fiance doesnt B..anymore" haha:p

    really nice...specially the whole dream idea;);)
    November 25th, 2009 at 08:25pm
  • Sugartrout

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    *familiar scene from... ^-^ I forgot to re-read my comment. sorry dear.
    November 25th, 2009 at 06:22pm
  • Sugartrout

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    Nuuba's Notes:

    1. >:O

    2. Anal, wtf?!?!?!?!

    3. SYN!??!?!?!

    4. >:O

    5. Syn on his kness head inbetween the girl's legs while jerking himself off... Now where is this famialir from? :'''D I knew you loved that scenario, but to re-create it. lawl!<3

    6. SYN IN YOUR FAN FICTION!?!?!?!

    7. ewh, bum-business.

    8. syn in your fic, I'm seriously losing it. or you are.

    >:O
    November 25th, 2009 at 06:21pm
  • A7Xmcs

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    Hot damn mama! No, I wasn't at work but was at the hospital w/ Lauren. Damn you, damn you! You did an amazing job writing JC...hells.
    November 25th, 2009 at 05:58am
  • jinx_the_scourge

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    Now I'm the one that should have put down a towel first lol.

    That was extremely hot. I can imagine it would be hard to write about Johnny but damn. You pulled it off very nicely. I imagine he would be all I'm sure I'll get what I want because I'm just so damn smooth. And then he'd screw your brains out because he has to overcompensate for being short. Now I'm really kinda digging Johnny. Hm.....

    I love the whole take an innocent and make her dirty thing. She was just sooo sure she didn't want any of those things and they proved her wrong.

    I wasn't expecting it to be a dream or then having the dream come true. Very nice twist. FANTASTIC! Well worth the wait.
    November 25th, 2009 at 02:36am