Search and Destroy - Comments

Hmm, excellent chapter. :) I always like reading sex scenes, they're just too good to pass up, especially when it's Macky sex. Just awesome. I can't get enough, I mean if there was a Macky story that you made with just endless sex, I think I'd be set. XD

I thought it was kind of funny how Matt wanted to make dinner again, but all that Zacky had in the house was pasta. "Do you want pasta again, or maybe some past, what the fuck is all you have in here pasta?" Those aren't the exact words, but you get the gist of it right? It's like one of those questions that's sarcastic in asking if you want only one thing, and it's just funny y'know?

With the sex scene, it was just fucking hot, plain and simple. The way that you transitioned into it so quickly made it better, because I got such a nice feeling in the pit of my stomach, like always. It was awesome. Also, I agree with you, I just can't picture Zacky topping especially with Matt, it's just odd... because he seems more feminine compared to Matt, and it would seem out of place if it were to happen in this story. It's just, I dunno'. x) Forgive me for rambling.

The whole thing with Zacky leaving and everything, I don't like the sound of that, because he could leave, and then someone really close to him could die or something, I do not want that! D: I would die myself, well not really, but you get what I'm saying. XD Also, what about Matthew, would he not be miserable without his Zacky-muffin to always be there for him? I know I would... It's just not cool. :(

Once again, good update. <3
More soon?

xoxx ~City of Evil.

It's rare that I get email notifications while I'm awake because of where I live.
So here I am on Facebook and MSN, completely bored, talking with my friends.
*Ding!*
'OH EM GEE A NEW STORY UPDATE'
And I'm thinking: Please let it be Search and Destroy, please let it be Search and Destroy.
And then CLICK.
And then "FUCK YES!"
And then I read.
And then I go "WOW THIS IS GOOD."

But won't Matt miss Zacky? D:

So yeah. This chapter was really, really wonderful. I forgot what my favorite chapter was, but this one is definitely on my top five or whatever. And some lines were so FUNNY!
Such as:
Sugar coating motherfucker.

"Except there won't be anybody to defend my honor." He heard Matt chuckle.[/i[

And then there was this whole section that I absolutely loved:

Matt reached out again to squeeze the back of his neck, "But you're just so cute when you get your feathers all ruffled up!"

Zacky got out of the car. Matt was close behind, though, still chuckling. "I'm taking a shower, dick."

"Thanks for the information, sweetheart. Glad to fucking know."

That first line was really cute. I adored it! More so because Matt squeezed his neck and stuff. LOL.

So anyway, continuing on those funny lines:

"You want, uh, pasta again?" Matt called up. "Or er, pasta, or, oh maybe. Shit, dude is all you have pasta in here?" Zacky sighed with maybe a little smile.

Zacky rubbed the heel of his hand against his eye. "You're a lot more fucking gay then I thought you were." <-- MAJOR LOL

And then "You are doing nothing to help your argument." made it even better.

And then they had sex. SCORE.

And my favorite line(s) for this chapter was: Zacky groaned. "Time for fucking sleep. Still school tomorrow, asshole."
"Love you, too."

It was sooo funny and cute!!!

This whole chapter was hilarious and adorable :D I loved it soo much!!!! It was a very pleasant surprise, too. With all the sad shit going around I figured it'd be pretty grim until they do something with the other gang. But I'm glad I was wrong. I can't stress how much I loved this one!

I love Matt's character. You've built him and executed him really well. He's just so perfect and Zacky's just so cute!!!

On a side note, I prefer if Zacky bottoms, too. In every slash, I like Zacky to be the submissive one. BECAUSE HE IS A CUTIE PIE. I'm quite content with Matt topping.

And you brought back the fluff and made me a very happy girl. Thanks man LMFAO.

Good job staying up all night. This chapter may have been done have asleep but it was verryyy WONDERFULLL

I say this all the time: I cannot wait for your next chapter!!!! Yay!!!

but I liked the fluff!

AWW WHAT A GLOOMY-FUL CHAPTER D:
And I've said this sooo many times but POOR ZACKY!!!!
And this time: Poor Jimmy. He's all stressed. When it's Dean's fault.
Actually poor Matt, too. 'Cause he has no friends and all 'cept like Zack and Jim.
And why would you go light on the fluff? I love the fluff. There is no such thing as 'too much of the fluff' The very idea of it is absurd! The fluff is good.
Oh, and Jimmy's super cool how he is like IN CONTROL and shit and you know how Matt was all like 'I don't like the way you were acting' to Zacky because he hit Evyn?
Well I strongly disagree because Matt should have been turned on by an outburst like that. What a strange guy. What makes him even stranger is like he thinks Evyn is still Zacky's friend. I mean double u tee eff man.

Favorite and funniest line: "Don't worry Zacky V. We'll take care of it. You got yo hunk-o-man and me working on it."

Because YES. Matt is a hunk-o-man and it describes him PERFECTLY.

Uh.. I don't know what kind of line it is but I liked it: "I want to get all these fuckass ideas out of your heads before you make an asshole out of yourselves like Evyn, okay?"

Because those douches should be glad Jimmy warned them. They probably would have gotten themselves kicked out, too. Because they are douches.

And you know how they like acknowledged Zacky while they were leaving? I scoffed when they did that. And I really hate Greg because he's SUCH A SPINELESS BASTARD. SERIOUSLY. WHAT IS HIS PROBLEM!? DOESN'T HE KNOW THAT I WOULD LIKE HIM SO MUCH MORE OF HE WASN'T SUCH A SPINELESS BASTARD??

OHH AND I LIKED THIS LINE, TOO: Zacky wanted to say Because he was messing with you! But he figured that sounded whiney and kind of pathetic, so he stayed quiet.

BECAUSE IT'S JUST SO CUTE!

This was ahhh-mazing as always! I can't wait for the next update!!! ^^

Poor Jimmy... I feel so bad for him. I wanna' hug him too! D;
It's awesome how obedient all of them are to him though, because if it weren't for that then only Zacky and Matt would be left, which even though Matt is tough and buff, as well as Jimmy, it probably wouldn't cut it, much to my dismay.

Despite the depressing tone of this chapter I liked it, it helped open up the story more, and I still love how gentle Matt is to Zacky, it's so adorable! :3
More soon?

xoxx ~Frankie's Harlot.

holy crap!

Wow those guys are jerks. Get over it! More soon?

I really like how you started off the story, because sure there are stories on here that are set place in high school, but some aren't very realistic, and this one is, especially with the gang thing, because there are some in my school... which I guess you could say is a bit unnerving.... oh well, I'm not involved so I'm not exactly worried about it. I really like the fact that Zacky and Matt are having a forbidden romance, it's just hot... honestly, I about jizzed my pants when I thought about it. Also Dean's a douche for kicking Zacky out of the gang when he found out he was gay, it isn't that big of a deal, just an itsy bitsy crush, alright so it's bad, but whatever!

I liked chapter two a lot, I mean secret meetings in a supplies closet? Awesome! x) It's also very endearing how Matt is so calm and collected, not to mention caring towards Zacky. It makes me swoon. :) It did make me a bit sad though when Zacky gave the suggestion of Matt hitting him, not cool. I also found it funny how Dean and everyone else shrugged off Zacky and Matt's excuse, like it was nothing that two guys from opposing gangs that nearly hate one another are walking together. x) It's just funny I think.

Again, it's funny because Zacky's all zoned out of everything, and can't focus, but at least the guys notice it instead of leaving it be. That'd be weird, cause I'm sure if Zack were left alone to his thoughts, he'd have a perma-boner. *dies laughing at the thought* Okay, sorry about that, but I seriously just made up a word, although it kind of makes it seem like Zacky's pubes have a perm... XD I'm terrible... but I don't care. ;) Kind of interesting how they have code words, for instance fuckface, just awesome for a code word... I mean because no one would actually suspect anything when they say it, unless of course they say it to one another when they're in a gang that's like family. It'd be kinda funny though, just picture it, Jimmy and the rest of the guys are sitting at the lunch table, and are talking when Jim stands up from the table and shouts, "FUCKFACE!" Course that wouldn't ever happen, would it? I'm just imagining things... because I can.

Chapter four and chapter five, fuck me! Dear God, they seriously made me piddle myself with joy. Just the way that Zacky and Matt treated each other when they were getting ready to have sex, it was so sweet! And then fucking Lydon had to ruin it in Chapter six, dammit, that didn't make me happy. x) I did laugh though when he said he puked all over the taxi driver.

I honestly want to leave you more, but I can't right now because I have to go to class. Sorry! I'll put more up later. ♥

xoxx ~Shadows Vixen.

I loved it =D

Another amazing chapter!! EEE

Okay, first of all: FUCK Evyn. And everyone else. Although I have mentioned this before. This chapter made me hate them all so much more!!! GRR
All those insults they said to him made me go 'WHAT THE FUH?!?!'
And Jimmy's cool! Go Jim for kicking that prick out of the house! Oh, and Matt being all calm and collected was the HOTTEST THING EVER. Weird, I know, but he's hot!
And Brian trying to leave the gang made me go 'HELLZ YESSS' too! Was Brian leaving mentioned before? If so, I probably forgot. Sorry. But whatever. At least I know now.
Poor Zacky D: Why's he always getting beat up? He never did anything wrong. All he mostly does is stand there and look cute. But good thing he punched whatshisface >:P I hope he has a broken cheek and that his face will forever be deformed so he can't ever get a girlfriend.

Favorite Line: Before anything else happened, though, Zacky felt a large hand on the back of his neck, pulling him back, away from Evyn.
BECAUSE I LIKE THE IDEA OF MATT RESTRAINING ZACKY. It appeals to me.

Most well written line: That made the skin on the back of Zacky's neck prickle, because the fucking things he'd done to try to stay faithful.

Um.. I can't explain why this was the best written. It's not a random line, I swear. There's a reason deep in my heart that I have yet to find. If I ever find it, I probably won't, I'll tell you.

OTHER favorite line: "Okay," Matt said, in a voice of finality, "you better watch your fucking mouth Evyn.
THIS IS MATT TAKING CONTROL! It also appeals to me.

Satisfying line: His cheek was even redder where Zacky had clipped him. and Jimmy didn't bat an eye when he said "Get out."
GO ZACKY. BEAT HIM UP. GO JIMMY. KICK HIM OUT.

Okay, I hope this overly long comment doesn't piss you off. I hate writing comments D: But I like writing for this story.

Your writing is FANTASTIC! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Uh oh! I hope that no one else dies! More soon, please?

Okay, I honestly can't remember the names of the minor characters and I am kind of in a hurry, but I'll comment anyway! Alright, so I remember Greg being the spineless bastard who couldn't stand up for Zacky.. Because he's a spineless bastard. Which means the others including Devin were the ones that were mean to Zacky, right? If so, then I am glad he is dead. Kill them off one by one, see if I care -_- Zacky should just be like "Fuck that. They're not real friends." Then have hot sex with Matt, and then maybe Brian can join in later on, except that's kind of weird because Matt and Brian are brothers, but oh well. Oh, but before all that Dean should die, too because he kind of sucks also. And.. the other members of Dean's group. HAHAHA LOL. Okay, whatever. KILL THEM ALL (Except for the A7X boys.)

But other than that! I liked this chapter! Kind of. I mean, there wasn't much. It was just like "Yeah.. He died." But it's okay! I think it's cute that Matt and Zacky are like together and shit and not caring about what their gangs think about. Well, at least Matt doesn't. But Zacky's cute.. So it's okay.

I will be waiting for your next update. Sorry this is kind of long. Actually, if you read it, it should take you less than thirty seconds or something like that, so it's not that long. But it took me a while to type it because I kept on making typos.

Hoping for more soon!!!!

I wish I was a walrus.

Yikes!

“I got invited by the boss.” Matt said over his shoulder. “They can suck my left one”

Funny

Ohh boy that was a good chapter! More soon, please? Haha your drunken author's note made me laugh :)

I love this so much so far!

Gahhhh I wanna know the secret Matt and Jimm are keeping from ZVVVV, GRGGRGRGR

omg those three assholes should get shot. and what's with the bad news >< curious here!

what the fuck?!? DUDE I DIDN'T GET THE EMAIL THINGIE FOR CHAPTER TWENTY AND UNTIL NOW I HAVE BEEN IN THE DARK!!! T__T

the only reason why i found chapter twenty was because i was re-reading it... and by the way those three dudes, forgot their names, are ASSHOLES. and so is greg for not sticking up for zacky more and WHERE THE FUCK is matt?! i hope things went well with Brian.. POOR ZACKY. oh my god update soon

kill dean (is that his name?)! kill those other three guys! make zacky and matt elope!

Um okay I am absolutely and totally in love with this story so far! I have totally subscribed and I just can't wait to see what happens next! Damn, I hope the guys who are against them being together don't try some crazy messed up shit. They should just be allowed to be happy! what's so wrong with that?