August 17th, 2011 at 05:45pm
No. I just haven't had the time to write.
I will update ASAP.
Maybe - Comments
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February 22nd, 2011 at 03:26am
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I'm...guessing you dropped this story?....February 8th, 2011 at 06:32am
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You need to continue this!February 21st, 2010 at 12:30am
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Audrey, is this like totally based on your life except for the fact that you're not in eighth grade? xP Hehe, awesome!! Update, lady :PDecember 10th, 2009 at 12:30am
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Well... So far, I sorta like it! Even though it was sorta short and stuff... But I can't help but want to read more...! : ]December 8th, 2009 at 09:31am
Layout: The layout was so cute and matched the story so well, but I ended up switching to the default layout becaue the font was so small and the spacing was nonexistent.
Content: What a cute little story! I loved how the last line, "And the two haters loved." It reminded me a friendship---and only a friendship---that I had a couple of years ago. I liked how they teased and fought, but internally loved. I didn't know what you were saying during the chats...the text talk was so confusing (yes, I do text, but not like that).
Spelling & Grammar: Next time, please put spaces between paragraphs. I saw your comment at the end of the story but it was still hard to read. There were a lot of mistakes that I glided over...I didn't even want to try and sort them out. (:
Overall: This was a cute little piece of lovey-doveyness. :P