I Am as Vain as I Allow - Comments

UHM, I LOVE YOU.
Err, rather, this story. Cause it's really good!

Keep writing, it has me hooked :)

Oh and I also really liked how realistic it was. Sorry for the double-post.

I really like this! It's probably one of the best fanfics I've read on Mibba so far. Of coure, I haven't read many yet... but still, I really like it! I just read chapter 3 but I'm going back and reading the other two when I finish this.

Some comments:

"What I had actually done during the summer was sit in front of the piano, read endless amounts of books, sing, and spend too much time with my younger sister." I liked this because it sounded like my summer. xD Except I didn't spend too much time with my sisters because we don't really get along and never have. :P

"I changed a lot that school year. I got much taller, gained a bit of confidence, grew closer to my mom, and even started great friendships." This sounds like my sophomore year. You're not stalking me, are you!? Bahaha just kidding. Sorry. That was weird to say. :P

"'This dance is supposedly supposed to be a faith-filled night with tasteful songs where were can just hang out as boys and girls, not fuck on the dance floor,' I let out, happy to have someone to finally talk to." This part made me laugh. Bahaha.

Okay. So.

What I liked best was the voice you used. It was really great, and it sounded like it could be a real memoir. It also sounded like it could've been written by Lady Gaga, from what I know of her. But maybe her clothes should be just a tad weirder? Or maybe not. I dunno. It's your story.

What to be careful of:

Detail. In any other story it would be great. But I doubt anyone would remember every little detail of a single night. You were pretty good with your distribution of details for the most part, but some things could've been omitted. Like the outfit she wore? Or the order of the songs? I mean, it must have been a really influential night in her life if she remembered ALL of that. So just be careful. Oh, and another thing. You might want to double-check when those songs came out. I could be wrong and I probably am, but I think one or two of them may have come out after Lady Gaga was fourteen.

Also your vocabulary could use a bit of work. But then again, so can mine. So I guess I'm not one to judge.

So that's how I felt about it! I really did like it, though, so I'm gonna subscribe. Yay! Please continue this story ASAP! :D

I love you for writing this <3
Subscribed.

I love this. <3

Jesus Christ Finally!! keep writing!

I adore chapter four! :O

Wow, this is excellent so far! Really well written, well put together and interesting to read. Her voice is really clear, and realistic enough to stand out.
I like it quite a bit. Thanks for choosing to write it, please continue!

Je T'aime!!!! Tres Bien Ecritez!!!

I love it. :3 Keep it up!

I'm really loving this story.
Keep writing ^,^

I would love to read more!

i really like your story , there are not a lot of Lady Gaga stories though i wish there were more .

I love it <3
Updates ;D

Ahhh!
This is really good.
I like it. :D

Ooh! This story really caught my attention. I'm in love <33
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I love you. I'm subscribing.

I adore this so far!
I’m super stoked for this story,
can’t wait to see where it goes.

I think it's pretty interesting{:
Update soon.