OMG I seriously almost cried hearing the last line. Like theres tears in my eyes right now, the only other story that has done that to me is Unwanted In Wonderland. That story had been going for almost two years and its amazing, I seriously cannot believe that I'm almost crying right now. Wow, you are truly an amazing author to make someone feel this kind of emotion. I wanna call my Daddy.
i am so fucking smart! i figured out how to comment with my new phone! yay! i dnt know if i hav ever commented on this or not cause i hav been reading from my fone. But i realy love this story. I totaly agree with kat bout the father daughter bond!!!!
omg this was like one of the best stories i have ever read!!!!! i know its not done yet but still.... i fell in love with this story and stayed up tilll now to finish reading all the chapters you have written! which is pretty damned late its like almost 1 am and i started at like730 ish lol but i fucking love this!!!!!!!! cant wait for more!!
She finally told everyone what happened that night. I bet all Matt wants to do is kill Elliot! Can't wait till the next chapter. I can't believe it's ending, will there be a sequel???
New reader but I'm hooked. I'm sad that I joined pretty much in time to see it end, but I do demand that if you must end this quickly, please start writing a new story A.S.A.P. You've got talent. :)
good, she finally told her dad! now something can be done about that sick son of a bitch! i know matt is going to be upset and blame himself but it'll take a lot of therapy for the whole family. it always does in cases of extreme violence.
my only piece constructive criticism is that there were lots of typos in the last update. might want to re-read. :)
UPDATE SOON! <3