Fantasies - Comments

I hope to see more...soon?

you're a good writer. :D

Ah! I loved this update. :)

They finially met. And haha, what a way to meet. I'm really curious as to where this goes, because it's going to be short... and what you said about it being called Fantasies for a reason... it makes me question something... though I won't say it up here. I'm probably wrong and it's stupid.

This was awesome; you should not doubt your writing abilities.

I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH.
OH. YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW.
DON'T. EVEN. KNOW.

This was a most intriguing third chapter and, hurrah, they finally meet. Although the way Sierra, or rather Kaelyn has allowed for herself to be seen almost naked and exposed is quite extroadinary (for lack of better word). I don't think you should doubt your ability, this was an exceleent chapter, especially since you've gotten them to interact with each other silightly.

I look forward to read more about them. No matter when, and how slow, your updates are.

You underestimate your writing !
That chapter was great, I thought when they met it would take away the novelty of the story but it made it so much more alive.
The way you write is just so descriptive and you have to write more, the story leaves questions ....

Wow. This is a great story. (The layout too, btw). I get sort of a dreamy feeling reading it, like everything's not real. I'd really like to see where it goes. I'm looking forward to more. =)

Awwwwwww.
That was so cute. I like how you're getting them to meet by iPod.
And that she answered her door in a towel. :D
Update soon, prettypleaseandthankyou.

This is... amazing! When I read the first few words and saw the name Kaelyn pop up I thought it was girl until you mentioned a he and I was shocked, but it still works lovely. The two chapters are amazing; the layout is amazing - as is everything else you have used.

I'm intrigued, and I can't wait to see how it all unfolds!

I really like this. I wanna know what's happening.. bad.

I really really like this.

Sierra is definitely a very different name (that's a good thing).

Haha, for some reason, the very last line of the second chapter made me laugh. I don't even know why. But I am curious to see how this plays out.

I love the layout, too, by the way. It's pretty. :)

Yayay!! Thanks for the update, love : ) I really do like this story a lot.
Merry Christmas Eve! xoxo

:D
This was fantabulous, Katie dear. Really.
I am really loving this story.
Merry Christmas Eve! Hope you have a lovely day and update soon, pretty please :)

Oh yes. I've been waiting for this. <3

YES. It's out, it's out, it's out! Woo hoo!
And what a wonderful start. I like how you described days in the life of both characters without having them meet yet.
That was good.
And I love how Sierra's dog is named Lady. Perfect name for a dog.
Sierra is a pretty rad name as well. And I like the spelling of Kaelyn's name. It's not the common spelling, but you can still tell what the name is.
Amazing job, Kaite :D

I really like the start to the story. Your writing flows really nicely and everything is described so nicely.
I love the layout and summary and picture too.
How do you get those swirls between characters ?
Update soon !

ooh, me likes the guy's name :)
please write this! it looks awesome dude :)

Yayyyy :)
Another story of yours! Can't wait for ittttt.
Oh, and first comment, ftw.
The line you have for the summary sounds a little weird though. "Everybody just wanna fall in love."
To me, it sounds a little off. "Everybody just wants to fall in love." sounds better, in my opinion.
But what you have can work, I think.
Anyway, you should start this. Soon. Yes, very soon :)