A Dragon's True Nature - Comments

  • celestial_royalty

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    There are a few things- firstly, the dragon introduced itself as Drake and suddenly turned into Darigan. Not correct. Secondly, a Rider can't hide anything from their dragon because their minds are intimately linked. They can't lie to each other- it's like lying to oneself. The rest seems to just be spelling errors and should be easily fixed.
    December 13th, 2011 at 05:09am
  • Nulll

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    Yuz! update(s)!!!!
    September 6th, 2010 at 08:05am
  • Nulll

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    Awww! You updated! I almost had a heart attack when I saw! <3 Loved em
    September 2nd, 2010 at 04:04am
  • Nulll

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    Amazing new chapters :) I totoally love the Eragon theme :)
    February 19th, 2010 at 01:57am
  • Here's Hoping

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    I think someone's an Eragon fan! I really like Kanashii because she fights back. I hope you get the next chapter up quick.
    February 7th, 2010 at 06:07pm
  • Nulll

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    Im totally in love with this story! Its flippin amazing! when can we expect the next chapter? (: Im totally on a Sugar/Happy high.. (:
    January 3rd, 2010 at 10:54am