so i know that the contest was suposed to end 4 days ago so i should have read this earlier but i had a dumb last minute vacation thing. anyway, i love it. yeah jack is a goof, i would have thought that he would freak out and jump away if he saw that one of them wasnt wearing chlothes. XD. i like how long it was, it really was something to read. the ending was nice! i think it was great! the proposal was just great, writen very well and a nice reason to go with it. =) and i know that you are the only one that entered, but you would still get the grand prize. =) haha you win! =]
AWH! :3 Haha, I officially love your stories. x] I love how you ended it, though. A marriage proposal right there... That was so cute. If you had submitted this for some sort of proposal contest, I'm sure you would've won. :]