Peter Pan and Wendy Turned out Fine. Why Can't We? - Comments

You have a few errors all through out the story that need to be fixed. Like in chapter two you spelled "merry" wrong. It's supposed to be "marry". There are also some I's that need to be capitalized.

So... since you're reading my one story, I decided to check out yours. :) I liked the first two chapters you have of this, you're a great writer! So please, don't delete this and continue! :D I love the idea you have going with this, and I can't wait for more! So please, update it soon! :D

I like it, You just need to put more planning into it, and edit it, If you want i can look it over before you post it, So it may help to make a layout because this sounds really good. :)

Pls don't delet this story Kay

haha! I loved that! "Yeah um...you're mom told me you would say that so I should do this-" *Flings Jennifer over shoulder* haha! Update soon!