Just Take Off Your Wings - Comments

this is incredible
really well written, emotional, almost honest, if that makes any sense at all
you most definitely deserve the win (:

Oh. My. Jesus.

That's freaking awesome.

I adore your kick ass writing skills and I'm totally jealous of them.

Sheeesh. Like everyone on here can write except me...

Anyways!

I love this!

And I told you I will write a full review, so I'm going to to that now.

We already went over the holiday choice, which made me very happy. I love that Jack is logical about everything and Alex… well he is Alex, what more can I say. As I stated before, you write slashes that aren’t your stereotypical slashes, and I like that. They are creative and unique, which is NEVER a bad thing. And there was a happy ending, which made my day much better.

I love love love the way you interpreted the song. Again, it was unique and I love that in a story. I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again. I LOVE your stories, and I think you did a WONDERFUL job.

First off, you don't suck, Steff, you rock, and your writing kicks ass. (It had to be put out there)

Now I don't even know where to begin....

Drunken Alex breaking up with a girl, check.
Alex picking Jack over Lisa, check.
Happy ending, check.
Me being a very, very happy reader, check.
Me being sad that a very good story is over, check. (But it's still amazing as hell, so it's okay =D)

NAWWW! loverly! its just sweet. haha. drunken alex, meet break-up. sounds about right. =]

awww loved it!! :)
i think u should start a jalex slash story ;)

I'd hope it's not the end Steff. XD Just kidding, if it was the end I wouldn't be upset because I love this.

I really think it's a good story, because it's different than all the other slashes I have read. And contest wise you picked a holiday many people are going to overlook as a winter holiday (can you say bonus points?? =D)

I need to say this...
Dammit Jack, why won't you give you and Alex a shot!?!?!?!

Okay, I feel better. Can't wait for the next part Steff =D

i love it :)
update soon??

Okay, I'm excited. And I'm warning you now, I'm going to do a short, I guess you can say, review after every chapter, then a full review after you're finished with the story, because that is how I roll =D

Chapter one was amazing to say the least.

I'm loving the fact that Alex is with Lisa, but so is Jack. And Jack is being rather logical, in my opinion, about Alex not breaking up with Lisa because of one kiss, and trying to make Alex think about everything for a while.

I'm excited for the next part. =D