He Never Came - Comments

Can I please pay you to update?

great update

Yaaaaaaaayy!!!!!!! New update!!!!

Your back!!

is this going to be updated again or did you move sites?

Just started reading. You talked about commenting on grammer and such. Just noticed "“Look I’m sorry that I blew up on you **yesterday** but we were kind of worried about the fact that you didn’t come home last night." on chapter 9. But I like the story so far!! Seems odd he wouldn't recognize the girl he dated for a long time, but who knows.

i read that article and nearly cried

This is awesome. I actually love this, it's so good. Keep it up, I know that this comment was neglected through the story, but Here it is. I love joey, she's about my favorite girl in the whole mixx. Shads is cool, he's tough like a greaser, y'know? Haha. I love the outsiders and the guys remind ke somewhat of them. There all older Dallas's, anyways.... Keep It up, I can't waitfor more.

Hey
loved the update
and it's good to know that he still has some type of feelings toward her still
and he feels a little guilt
so I hope you update soon :)

P.S- do you think you can message me or comment on my page or put it in the authors note or something if you find a good replacement website. Cause I agree with you. It is really hard to find good stories these days :-/

Seriously this was fucking awesome
If Matt's going to get his hands on Mel.....that's going to be something
With Matt you now don't know if he wants to fuck or kill her
At least he ralized that it was wrong what he did to Mel
And he's really pissed of that Joey (i don't remebr if it was her) hit him over the head
The girls have to seriously be on the lookout for the guys
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

Again; please don't quit mibba. ):

I feel so sad for Melanie.
Matt deserves what he gets even though he used that lame excuse about getting a worse sentence.
I hope Melanie gets him back hard because she didn't deserve to be left behind.
I can't wait for her to finally move on from Matt!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

loved the update
wonder what's going to happen next

aww Matt still loves her...but is that enough to keep him form trying to kill her?

its nice to know that he has thought about what he did to Mel and knows it was wrong

i cant wait to read the next few chapters!
i love reading their thoughts on each other =)

awesome update! =)

Fuck yeah! Update! Woo-hoo! I'm pining with want over what's going to happen to them!

cant wait for more

Are you going to continue

I also enjoyed your long, and possibly mind dedicated author's note after the ending of Chapter 13. :D
It was snippy, slightly upbeat in an angry aguish way. lD And I loved it because of that. Only because I'm a naturally angry person, and I enjoy the anger whenever it's used to say something or write something. :) (: So yeah.
What I didn't add in the last comment:
He slapped her! And he was going to shoot Melanie! Go Joey! Hit 'em with that baseball bat!
But wait... What shall happen when Shadows wakes up...? Hnnn.... *strokes long, invisible, white, wizard's beard* XD

Sorry if I haven't commented before, but I'm a dedicated reader.
I love the plot as it is, and the ending you left for the newest update-which I loved-has me wanting for more. I'll just sit here and wait for the next chapter.
Well, not actually sit here where I am until you do, but you get my drift. :D I think... o?o
I'm also a subscriber! lD Yays!
Weeeeeeellllll..... UPDATE SOON!!!! PLEASE!?!

cant wait for more