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  • xXLostXSoulXLoverXx

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    I love it :D Can't wait for more :)
    March 14th, 2012 at 06:36am
  • Emilise284

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    Yup, I'm sticking with my guess of Marcus of the Volturi... There was just one common mistake I noticed you often making...
    Though we often say "should of" and the like to make the phrase shorter, the actual grammatically correct way of phrasing this is "should have." Same goes for "would have," "could have," and and those with "not" added afterwards... :) Correcting this error will make the story easier to read and understand!
    Otherwise, I love it! This is a great story with a great plotline (so far). I'm wondering whom the other 3 elementals are and I'm really anxious to know if my Marcus guess is right! Though if he is Marcus of the Volturi, why he's working with Victoria eludes me... because that's what it seemed like for a minute there, that he's working with Victoria...
    Update soon!!!
    January 2nd, 2012 at 12:54am
  • Emilise284

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    Okay, so this is just after chapter 16, and I haven't peeked at anything else, so I'm just guessing (I'll come back later, don't worry) that Marcus is Marcus of the Volturi!!! Just a guess, though. Be back in a bit!
    January 2nd, 2012 at 12:31am
  • kacie65698

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    u should continue with this story its different then all the other lovey dovey stories
    November 19th, 2011 at 08:38am
  • Chelsea's Dead Smile

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    Hmmmm this is very interesting indeedy.
    Please update as quickly as you can.
    November 7th, 2011 at 08:25am
  • Chelsea's Dead Smile

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    I'm sorry for this abrupt -shouldn't comment until I catch up- comment, but Its not Lincoln Park it's Linkin Park. Sorry, but it erked me for some reason, because I've seen that mistake constantly made through out the years I've been listening to the band and I just wanted to let you know.

    Now...no comments until I catch up.
    November 7th, 2011 at 05:43am
  • lifes_life

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    hey love your story!! Whens your next update?
    September 29th, 2011 at 04:20pm
  • JustThinking

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    excellent! an update! =) so Jesse is getting back to being Jesse? well, that was just waiting to happen so no surprise there. I just wonder what these powers will cost, as in consequences and dangers and so on.. and if there will be hard choices sooner than she might expect.
    September 6th, 2011 at 08:58pm
  • Bluecaty15

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    i love your story, keep up the good work. i wonder how jesse got her powers? is victoria dead? is she going to have to chose between jacob and mickey?? i can't wait to find out what happens next! Update soon!
    July 18th, 2011 at 10:35pm
  • celestial_royalty

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    I love the attitude- it makes things interesting. Did you go to that school you mentioned????? I went to a different one
    June 9th, 2011 at 01:54pm
  • Crimson TigerLily

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    Aw, so sad *pout* I don't think Jake would ever call his imprint clingy though, I think he'd enjoy it. but oh well, I guess you needed a reason for her to disappear. I liked the way it went, even if it was freakishly short. UPDATE! please
    May 24th, 2011 at 04:50am
  • JustThinking

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    it's not crap, but you have however done better. :D better luck with the next one.
    May 23rd, 2011 at 02:56pm
  • heyit'sjordan_

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    I love this, please update soon!
    <3
    May 23rd, 2011 at 04:02am
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    nice.
    May 22nd, 2011 at 07:18pm
  • slumflower

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    FUUUCK!! update!! Please i love jesse!! So is mickey evil?... He might b working w/ victoria>:) i love her too.
    November 26th, 2010 at 06:02pm
  • xBuiltxForxSin

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    YAY, you updated :D Jake!%$"^("$U You complete jerk! Gosh he made me mad calling her clingy... huff.
    <3 the update :D
    November 4th, 2010 at 11:01pm
  • Crimson TigerLily

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    0.0 What happens next? UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pelase
    November 4th, 2010 at 08:39pm
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    Dang... She said I love you.... :0
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    <3
    September 18th, 2010 at 11:32pm
  • Crimson TigerLily

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    What's up with her? She's not usually like that... UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please
    September 16th, 2010 at 10:02pm
  • CallistoRedbird

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    i love this story
    Marcus is from the Volturi right?
    August 6th, 2010 at 02:09pm
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