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  • Marilyn.

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    Oh goodness, it's been sooo long since you've updated =[
    March 25th, 2008 at 07:17pm
  • BlueBird.

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    as grace said, it was short but good.
    January 10th, 2008 at 07:37pm
  • chrissie.

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    i liked it. it was short yet conveyed alot about the character, and her background.
    well written.
    January 10th, 2008 at 07:27pm
  • chrissie.

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    It's Grace, yeah pretty hard to believe i know
    Please keep going
    I like it

    "we have a name for people who think everything is a conspiracy"
    "yes, Perceptive"
    December 3rd, 2007 at 06:05pm
  • chrissie.

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    Why is Levi slow? I don't get it!

    Anyway, I liked this chapter.
    =]
    October 28th, 2007 at 04:14pm
  • BlueBird.

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    arrrrgh! prepubescent fan girls!

    good chapter. yup.

    haha levi's so S L O W. nods.

    haha im just sitting here laughing now...
    October 23rd, 2007 at 07:20pm
  • Telenovela!

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    I really like this, I found it easy to follow. I like the way you put every other chapter in the present, and the others in the past. Cleverness!

    I am going to read invisible monsters, it sounds really good!

    more soon?
    October 23rd, 2007 at 05:56pm
  • Bite me?

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    I'm still confused with whats going on 0.o
    But I like the way it sounds so I'll continue to read =]
    Perhaps I'll go back to chapter one...
    Yeah.
    Most likely.
    LOVING THE REFERENCE TO PETE WENTZ AND FALL OUT BOY!!
    Addicted *raises hand*
    October 23rd, 2007 at 05:35pm
  • chrissie.

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    =] Yaya! I once again got confused, but then I remememembered the invisible monsters thing
    October 20th, 2007 at 07:16pm
  • chrissie.

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    Yeah, I like this one too!
    + I love the ava of the person above me!
    October 20th, 2007 at 07:07pm
  • Unicorn.

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    Well he is! That made me laugh (:
    Keep going please?
    October 4th, 2007 at 06:24pm
  • Bite me?

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    Hehe good as =]
    I can't remember if the main character is a chick, but apparently she is because of the Ryan Ross hotness comment haha.
    Wanting updates!
    October 4th, 2007 at 06:16pm
  • Bite me?

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    Hello there =]
    That was good as!
    Is there going to be more, I'm not quite sure if it's a series or one shot.
    I get confused easy hehe.

    I like that song =]
    September 29th, 2007 at 04:26pm
  • WizardBubblemiester

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    Popped the cherry.
    I really liked it, actually.
    I got a little confused, and then I realised the refrence to Invisble Monsters and I was all good again =]
    tehe. the broken... wonder where that came from.
    September 29th, 2007 at 02:56pm
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