Cherry Lipstick - Comments

This was spectacular!
It's a great idea, and the twisted ending just shocked me...
The ending paragraph was excellent, and I began to wonder where they're stashing these bodies. XD

Thank you for reading and commenting (: It was a one shot with twist ending; it should be confusing; it should lead you to one direction and then in the end, it turns out as something totally different (:

*wrinkles nose* I like this idea, but it is slightly confusing. You might want to add a bit more to the summary, even though thats what really caught my attention. However, you've won yourself a new subscriber.

I also think you could do with a cover and a less blurred image.

My name is Darren, I've stolen the first comment on this story. And I'd love for you to update soon.