The Weight of the Sky - Comments

  • Rocket Queen

    Rocket Queen (405)

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    Aww this was such a sad but touching story, I really liked the innocence of the two children when they were 9 years old and discussing the sky.

    I didn't expect the story to take the turn that it did, and find out that Kaylee had died. It was moving when Adam, fifteen years later, was still staring up at the sky as he and Kaylee had done as children. Ever more so when he reached his arms out to "push" the sky back up.

    Short but sweet; a great story. Well done.
    January 27th, 2010 at 04:40pm
  • Drop Dead Malicious!

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    Wow... it has an amazing start :]
    November 28th, 2009 at 07:24pm