Thanks :)
November 29th, 2009 at 08:30pm
I almost died when he said he didn't want to marry her! But I loved the happy ending, It was too cute! And the way she apologized with the song, was brilliant! What song was that by the way?
You also, need to put line breaks after they speak though, because it's hard to read in one continuous paragraph. It makes people wonder who is speaking
EX.
Jack, where were you yesterday?” I asked.
“Why does it matter?” He replied