July 15th, 2008 at 06:50pm
wow
this is actually original.
i love it.
must subscribe.
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February 20th, 2008 at 09:12pm
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Do you know that the walls of seventy five point nine of public schools are painted the exact same mixture of beige, imitation yellow and puke green?
*percent :mrgreen:
I found my homeroom with impeccable ease. (Truth? It was seven doors down from the office) And I touched the metal doorknob almost shakily. My fingers twitched like a severed lizard’s tail. Why in the world was I so afraid? It was, after all, just another high school. Just another place filled with unoriginal people.
I'm pretty sure that was my favorite paragraph. Lizard reference. 8P [/horrible comment]January 3rd, 2008 at 06:07am -
This update is for the amazing horsie890.
She's pwnage :arms:January 3rd, 2008 at 05:10am -
OMGOOOOOD.
This is insane.
I love it.
Please updateeee (L)November 10th, 2007 at 06:38am -
I love, love, this story.
Everything about this is different, original, and unusual.
The way you write flows so nicely and the descriptions are fantastic.
Please update soon!November 4th, 2007 at 01:39pm -
Horsie, you are such a goofball.
A MAFIA GOOFBALL! Hehe:hug:November 4th, 2007 at 12:04pm -
Jesus.
You know, I'm a little tired of getting owned into the dirt like this. It's making me feel bad. ;_;
That's okay, though. Because your story is fricken awesome enough to make up for it.
The last bit there really got me. School is impossible to conquer, even for Tabbi.
OR ISIT?!XDI'm such a goof.
Sorry for the pathetic comment. But you took all the good words already.November 4th, 2007 at 12:01pm -
This is really good. I hope you write more soon.October 13th, 2007 at 06:31am
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Aberzombies. It killed me. XD
You keep telling me I should write professionally, when really it should obviously be you.We'll form that Mafia at some point anyway so it won't matter much longer.October 7th, 2007 at 12:00am -
You should seriously be a pro writer. Or something..
It's different, and the descriptions are amazing. =]October 5th, 2007 at 06:41am -
I loved this. The way you used examples of people whenever Tabbi needs inspiration. Throwing in Gerard Way, funny. =] You're a talented writer; I absolutely adore your style. And, I look forward to more, this story is going to turn out interesting, I think. Looking forward to more.October 3rd, 2007 at 04:59am
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I think it was really interesting. I would like to read another chapter of it, just because I want to know more about the main character.October 1st, 2007 at 01:42am
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- Spaztastic:
- The whole story line I think is very original. Mibba sees many stories about gays and such, but none about drag queens. I find drag queens to be interesting – and pretty. Well they are! So, that’s what caught my attention right when I read the summary.
Your wording, and the way the whole thing flowed, is just too good for words. I like the comparisons you made with a white face. It made me smile.
The descriptions were just phenomenal!
Thank you! September 30th, 2007 at 12:20pm -
I like it...
Love the title!
And was really descriptive!
Update soon, cause I want to know what happens next!September 30th, 2007 at 12:15pm -
The whole story line I think is very original. Mibba sees many stories about gays and such, but none about drag queens. I find drag queens to be interesting – and pretty. Well they are! So, that’s what caught my attention right when I read the summary.
Your wording, and the way the whole thing flowed, is just too good for words. I like the comparisons you made with a white face. It made me smile.
The descriptions were just phenomenal!September 30th, 2007 at 09:15am -
wow. awesome. :)September 30th, 2007 at 07:41am
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i love this a lot keep it upSeptember 30th, 2007 at 07:02am
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Woah, I really like this :]
The whole narration of this story feels so close, so personal. It's like I can just imagine someone stood infront of a mirror, hating themselves and then doing everything afterwards.
You’re skin should be a blank canvas, a diamond in the rough.
I loved that line. It actually reminded me of something that Jeffree Star would say, even though it's only the title that is connected to him:tehe:
lagoon of a nose.
Nice description8)
OUT WITH THE NORM! IN WITH THE STORM!
That line made me laugh outloud so hard. This and the paragraph before are so inventive and out there like someone tearing down another person and rebuilding them as to how they like it.
You’re finally painting that canvas. Now let’s pick a different brush.
That is my favourite line in the whole story.
Make it smell cheap and stick to your skin like chewing gum.
Self explanitary xD
But even the brightest star is no use if there isn’t a night sky to shine in.
That's is an awesome way to end off the first chapter. You're a really, really good writer. Love it :]September 30th, 2007 at 06:58am -
its so different...and i love it!!!- AlannaXAddictive:
- Very good descriptions.
I've never read a story like this before...
ever.
But, yknow, I like it.
please, please wrtite more!
lovely description! September 30th, 2007 at 06:24am
Thank you for chapter dedication:] Twas amazingful. You're an amazingful writer; I don't know why you think you're not.
I can't wait for violence. :mrgreen: