Uh oh, seems like everyones getting their crush on, and its all on the main character. ( i kinda forgot his name, sorry.) So update, so we know who this nick person is.
Awww. I don't know what to think of Jasper still. He seems nice at times but then his mates and the drugs and drinking and stuff puts me right off him. Me want more! muhahahahha Can't wait til the next update :)
Jaspers cute. I can kind of relate to carter. i'm quiet and people like to pick my fights and fight them for me. I don't like it. But i feel bad for jasper and carter. Carter is so confused and i know how he feels sometimes. :/
You make a lot of writing errors, like you forget commas here and there and you capitalize things that don't need to be. But the story itself is really good.