Still Here - Comments

I quite like your second-person writing.
It's personally one of my favourite ways to write.
Loved this :)

I love you Korie.
And your writing.
:)

I need to point this out before I go onto reading the story, you failed to follow one of the rules. You didn’t put the disorder in the summary as asked, I asked the people to do that so I wouldn’t have to look up what disorder I had given you. But I’m thankful you at least put it into the chapter title so it saved me from having to look it up. But still. Moving on…

This is completely irrelevant to the story, but I adore the picture you’ve got up there. It’s very beautiful. But again, completely irrelevant but I thought I’d mention it. And before I continue I must thank you for lengthening your story to fit the minimum word count for this story, much appreciated. Just shows effort on your part. (:

I like the way you started the story off with a little bit of humor about past experiences with others with different disorders. That was a nice start. I also like how you wrote it from the other person’s point of view and not the one with the disorder, which was a nice touch to the story. Your writing seems to flow naturally, it doesn’t sound forced at all and I like that. Good job on the story.

Ohmygod x3498209483209482309842039.
Wow, I'm still crying. Seriously, that was amazing. Really great writing. This was one of the best one-shot's I've ever read. (:

Really original writing. I love it <3