The Moons' Call - Comments

i loved your story, you had me crying there so many times as i read it though!
please update again soon!!

Update sooonnnnn pweazzzzz

You need to find a muse and update. Like now. I love it! And Jake deserves to tell his side of the story! He obviously still loves her and something bad just happened to him. :[[ Please find something/someone that encourages you to write! I'm dying to know what happens next!

Oh my god! I love this story! Keep updating!!

what the hell jacob!! -.- so ya that was out of the blue but it was very good!! update soon please :D <3

oh wow, def. didnt expect that last chapter... but i love this story and hope u update soon!! :D

That was so sad.
I cannot believe that happened. Update soon please!

aww it was a filler-ish chapter but was wayy cute <3 adorable :]
wanna see less of paul and his girl tho lmao

This seriously needs more comments! I love it! but I wanna know more about that preface :D I think you're doing a great job, so keep it up!

I'z Beez Lurveein' this story!!
You really have a special talent!
....You got me all emotional and stuff!(:!!

lovedd this chapter!! <33 *subscribes* sooo cutee ;]

I almost ried reading this chapter. O.O

I loved it. <3 Update soon! xD

wow... amazing... just amazing.. i love this story.. you write soo well. i dont understand why anyone wouldnt like it or report you.. MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! please =)

AWE!!!! <3

This is a great story.
You have some errors, not many. But if you'd like,
I could personally edit your chapters. :3

Ouch! More please!

Ouch! More please!

I cannot wait for more!!!

Awesome story! Thanks for the update! Wow it was long! And that's a good thing. It was really great to get such a good treat after waiting so long for the update. :]] And such a cliffhanger! Update again soon!!

poor jake.

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