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  • D. Dixon

    D. Dixon (100)

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    Wow. That was...morbid, as you said, lol. But yes, it was awesome! :) Good luck! ^_^
    December 30th, 2009 at 07:51am
  • violent tremors.

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    This is really good, I like it. It's very descriptive.

    I hope you win. =D

    xx Tyarna.
    December 8th, 2009 at 08:31am
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    ok! it was really good, but there are a few gramatical errors and alot of fragments.

    Other than those things, i thought you did a very good job at making the picture come alive. I'll send you and inbox message or an e-mail of what i edited, and you can fixe them. There aren't to many mistakes though!!

    Good job. =)
    December 1st, 2009 at 07:50pm
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