It's over. And you did a mighty fine job ending it, I enjoyed every single chapter of this short story. It was packed with real emotion and I practically cried for the entire time reading it. This was the perfect way to end a story like this, and I thought that you did an amazing job. Bravo, hun!
That was absolutely brilliant, I can't believe that you came up with another version so perfectly. I was practically in tears because I was so happy. The detail and imagery were beautiful, as was the emotion. You are just... God. Just a fucking God.
You definitely have to update soon, I've been waiting. It feels like forever. This story is so good and emotional that it gives me shivers whenever I think about it.
wooooooooooooop, I love four brothers, I watch the DVD every time im happy, and it makes me sad, I ALWAYS CRY THOUGH. it's almost done :( Great chapter(s) though.