Living in a Fun House - Comments

  • Raven616

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    you say... you suck....??? PLEASE GIRL THIS IS AMAZING.... I love it. Thanks for sharing
    December 3rd, 2009 at 08:15pm
  • scratch_the_maven

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    Gah, I loved it. Just the word carnival brought the image of lights, ferris wheels, and cotton candy to my mind, lol. I really want to go to one now.

    And this was not shit. Now I'm nervous about mine, lol. I feel like it was better ^.^
    December 3rd, 2009 at 01:33am
  • Seven.

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    Ah, I loved it. It's better than mine. XD

    And I want to go on a Ferris Wheel too. I think we should all go together and torment everyone there. lol.
    December 2nd, 2009 at 10:28am
  • jinx_the_scourge

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    Sweet baby Jesus. I just wrote a long ass comment and it didn't post. That does not make me happy. At all. Grrr.

    Anyway. I think its the latter option. My wrath is a fearsome thing XP

    I know how hard it must have been to write a character like her. She was very different than the norm from you. But I appreciate that you tried something new for me. I could see more of the usual fiery attitude towards the end of the story. It was like meeting an old friend again lol. I love that he was confused by her even after having known her for so long. It would have been pretty amusing for him to have beaten the crap out of Zack though lol.

    And I'm intrigued by the idea of having sex in a fun house. Would it be completely lame to say it seems like fun?

    It didn't suck at all. I thought it was very good. But I do think you thrive on the pressure of waiting until the last minute lol.

    Now I want to go on a ferris wheel....
    December 2nd, 2009 at 07:42am