The Wicked End - Comments

lol lets just say its a vampire thing miyuh... lol ill explain more in the natural born killer story

Holy shit !!!!
I can't believe she said she loved him !
I think they're both insane in a good way ? Lol
And I'm soooo sad it's the end but it ended awesomely !
AND SHE'S PREGNANT HOW THE FUCK DID THAT HAPPEN SO FAST !!!
GOING TO THE SEQUEL NOW !!!
Miyuh

lol smog... idk man if matt kidnapped you and then when you slit his troaght (spelled the wonrg lol) he just gets up dusting himself off wouldnt you be just a tad bit freeked? oh and then also he locks you in a dark room and forgets to feed and water you? lol idk lol so every one stoaked for the mini finally?

This story was good... but it just got awesome! lol. sooo glad shes finally warming up to Shadows...haha we got sexy smut out of it :) Aw i hope she chooses to stay what girl wouldnt lol :) love this story.

Matt sexy time lol :) loved the update!!

lol i know what you mean MsSynnieVengeance lol and shit comon we all know they arent kidnappers.... *sad face* lol i got this mssg that my storry was so unrealistic and shit.... no shit girly its a FAN FIC

mmm so hot. I dont care matt could do whatever he wanted to me

I like it!
Cant wait for more!

Oh emm gee!
Incay believe she actuay slept with him !
He's such a meanie !
That was a terrible idea on her part calling out for gates
Can not wait for more !
Miyah

two chapters left in this !

Wow...love it!!!

I like this story.
Its cool.
Cant wait for the next update.

p.s take this as a warning there sex in the next chapter. and yeah its matt and Rory. heres a teeser< I gulped “uh I I uh don’t want you touching me like that” he laughed at that. “baby I told you your mine. Look what you do to me” he pressed him self to my side and held my hand in his. His crotch was on the back of my hand, and it was defiantly hard.>and from now on my fan fic is moving to http://avengedsevenfoldrp.proboards.com/index.cgi
so if you are intristed check that site out.

great update, this story is very interesting lol :)

haha thanks. so what you think?

i pressed on the link <3 :D

so i have like 800 readers and 98 subscribers. wierdos..... lol uhm so yeah http://avengedsevenfoldrp.proboards.com/index.cgi go there its cool

Awe :'(

i dk i have to see if i wana just have my own web site were i can be grammer less if i wanted to

Updateeee!!!!!!!!!
Please?