January 9th, 2012 at 04:06am
The Pauper Princess - Comments
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i absolutely loved this. typically I'm not a big fan of stories written in first person, but i was pleased to see that you were able to remain in the same tense, save the epilogue, and you're very eloquent. this was well written and i thoroughly enjoyed the characters, as well as your consistent plot. everything had a purpose, and that was refreshing.June 13th, 2010 at 09:07am
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AWWW!!! THAT WAS SOO CUTE!!!!February 7th, 2010 at 12:13am
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Yeah I just randomly looked up fantasies and came upon this...and devoured it in 2 sittings. i LOVE it. I just read from chapter 10 to the last one, and I couldn't get enough!
I love it.January 10th, 2010 at 12:09am -
Awhh....is that the ending? If so you should do a sequal!!! You are a very good writer! I loved evey second of it....well except the part where people died, Hahhahahah............December 21st, 2009 at 02:47am
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this is really awesome!! it keeps getting better and better!! :)December 20th, 2009 at 10:05pm
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I've never commented on this story until now!? I thought I had...Anyhoo's, I really do love it and I'm looking forward to future chapters!December 13th, 2009 at 10:29am
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YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY tis is truely amazing!December 12th, 2009 at 12:59am
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I love love love this...I keep thinking its a book and when I'm about to leave in the morning I'm like darn wheres my boook, then I'm like Oh Its online. Lol thats how good it is!December 5th, 2009 at 03:08am
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This is such a great story, its really well written its almost like your actually there! ^_^
I can't wait to read more, so update soon! =DDecember 3rd, 2009 at 05:51am -
this is really good. :)December 3rd, 2009 at 03:33am
I thought it was funny when Siya didn't know why Ekhol was angry about that guy almost killing her. I'm like, "He loves you and you can't even see it!"
I'm happy Metah(sp) got to be with Jegan!