Edenham Comprehensive - Comments

let us now if this is done fore, so we wont stay hopeful forever!

Ah.. I do rather miss this. I had popped on now and then for updates during my absence. ): Let me know if it's ever continued. ^^

I don't know if you've forgotten all about this or simply just gave up, but I just reread a whole bunch of it and fell in love all over again. If you ever get back to it, I'm not going to complain. :P

<3<3<3

all i can say about the updates :)

MY FAVORITE STORY EVER!! :D I'm SO glad you updated :)

I think the reason I like this story so much is because it's not *entirely* a love story. Like you actually have a well developed concept and storyline to everything and things play out really well. I like this story seriously SO much :)

The other reason I really like this story so much is because your characters are really well developed and I can relate really well with them :) I think you've done such an amazing job bringing out the true characteristics of Casey and Reuben :)

AHH!! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Thank you so much for updating :)

I like it. And I'm sooooo suspicious right now. >=l Tyler. What's he doing...

I'm just not convinced Tyler would just give in like that..

YES.
FINALLY.
I really loved this update. I dunno why, but I love political stuff in stories. It's interesting to me.

I especially loved the ending line. It was so Reuben xD

And guess what? I didn't find any mistakes! 10 points to Leisha!

But now I want to know what Tyler's thinking about all this. And GRR REUBEN SHOULD BE LEADING THEM

I'm done rambling now xD
<3
Icamane

Rah!! I cannot even wait for you to update next. I've been dying since November!! :(
It's such a good story and you're such a good writer. :D it's hard to find both those qualities. I do hope you update soon.

I had someone suggest NaNoWriMo to me. I was all excited about it, untill I looked at how busy I'm going to be this month. There's no way i could get a story past a chapter this month.

So, good luck!

Btw, I like how Georgia's attempting to change. And poor Tyler. All he wants is the money for his little sister now...

Awww, no more updates :(. Oh well, I hope you do well in NaNoWriMo! Anyways, I loved this chapter. It was funny with the awkwardness of Casey and Georgia. Somehow I don't think that they will be real friends and that they will just try and get along for Reuben's sake. I could be wrong though! Oh, and just to tell you, Reuben is now my favourite boys name. xD

luuuuuurrrrrrrved it :D

Wow. I don't even know what I can say BAD about this story. I've been reading this story NONstop ever since I came across it XD I seriously am in love with your writing style. :) it's so good :)

Wow.. The king has been dethroned..

OMG UPDATE YAY!
I laughed the entire time. Tyler finally got a taste of what's coming to him... BWAHAHAHA!
But gods Casey, grow some balls... >>

I'm pretty sure organization has a z not s... you said you wanted me to find something to fix, so I did xD
But I'm glad you defeated writers block momentarily... now I need to xD
Brilliant as always, love
~Icamane

This was great!!! I loved the ending especially. Glad that you're not abandonning this story; it would be a shame if you did. Update soon please! :)

loved the new chapter <3 it was incredibly epic.
I just see Hans Zimmer in a corner sitting behind an organ, working his awesome magic.
I love you :)

This is not going to go over well, is it...

Poor Izzy, technically, she's gonna be tossed too, now that Tyler has no money...

Wow, this is some pretty awesome writing. I just finished chapter 5, and i'm hooked. The only criticism i have, is description. You need just a tad bit more of it, especially since i spent a good while thinking Reuben was white. Anyway, other than that, it's an amazing story, interesting plot, and awesome writing! Although, this comment might be a little late, i looks as though you're finished. But better late than never!

love to the new chapters <3

awh, damn. i have so much to say but just don't know how to say it....hmmm.....

in future i think i shouyld just read, comment, read comment so i can remember my comments :L

i think georgia is awesome, and she may not be my favourite but she is damn well close :L

have fun demolishing the empire :D