i love it and think you should so keep it up! you had me crying every time she got hurt! jacob is an ass, how can he imprint on her and still hurt her every time! anyway, please update again soon!!
It's really confusing- I know we're supposed to be familiar with the chapters after reading them all, but it wouldn't hurt to put in little hints so we still know what's going on without having to re-read the entire story. There were a couple of typos, I believe where Edward was referring to Chief and Buck, and the colors just make everything more confusing.
um...LOL!!! such a kick out of this!!!!! hahaha it's not even that funny but I'm just in one of those moods. who did you use for Tasha's character? I can make you a banner if you give me a name. (ps- did paul imprint rachel, jacob's sister, in this? if not, you should totally have him imprint me! <33)
:OOOOO OMGGGGGG This is SOOO GOOD!!! I just started looking for Jacob stories for the first time in months and this is the first one I've really decided that I enjoy so CONGRATU-FREAKIN-LATIONS this is officially the best Jacob story I've read in months!!!!!!!!!!! I'm adding the stories to my subscriptions, and I've tapped into my crazy inner pop-loving girl and blasting out the Kesha, thanks to you. I'm usually more of an Avenged Sevenfold rock-type music girl but you kind of convinced me otherwise now...Anyway, UPDATE! And I'm really disappointed that Paul didn't trust her more or contact her- don't let their friendship grow weak! put it back together please, it's too beautiful to break...
and just to be clear, Charles messed the relationship up the first time during Valentine's day and sent the flowers, right?