Story of a Girl - Comments

WOW. thank you SO much. seriously, i appreciate that greatly, really. i've never had anyone say that about my writing. thank you, again.

Wow this is great. For your first story, this is wonderful. I haven't been on this site that long, but I have been a writer very long-I would say about 6 years. And believe me, my first story wasn't like this at all. This story is very detailed and that's a great thing. I think it would have been better to break up the paragraphs a little bit, or put spaces in between, but otherwise, good work. Keep writing!! You have talent!!

wow, thank you so much!
that means so much to me, really. i love getting feedback like that. (: thank you so so so much.
& there are capitalization errors & whatnot, but that's just how i write, i write in lowercase letters & use the "&" symbol all the time.
but really, thank you so much.

I really really liked this.
At first I thought it was a conversation between a girl and a therapist.
And then a girl and herself.
But, I guess it's an acquaintance and another person. This is really good. An original idea with lots of emotion.

There are some capitalization errors. And "&" should be spelled out. But other than that, it's amazing.