Smile - Comments

  • Sj Peltier

    Sj Peltier (270)

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    This is such a refreshingly different story. Though it has a familliar plot - known girl all his life but never never spoke to her - you've got such a descriptive voice that it seems new. I just love the way you've created this male character, an innocent love and a detailed feeling of happiness that all comes around to end with the smile.

    I'd love to hear another entry from you, please pick another theme and enter again ^^
    December 5th, 2009 at 03:55am