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  • dhiia6661

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    omygod:( matt’s so creepy! but you should believe me im crying in the last chap! LOL
    November 21st, 2011 at 07:49pm
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    six: Great chapter that was filled with awesome descriptions. Loved the girls retorts towards Val and Chelle. Wondering what's going to happen next?
    May 6th, 2010 at 05:05pm
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    five: Read the others. LOVED THE PICTURE. Wondering what's going to happen next? Great descriptions.
    May 6th, 2010 at 04:46pm
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    two: DANG, and she's still going. Liked this chapter. Wondering what's going to happen when Addie gets home? Zora reminds me of jimmy. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
    May 6th, 2010 at 04:29pm
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    two: Still awesomeness. Great descriptions and plot. Wondering what's going to happen next?
    May 6th, 2010 at 04:16pm
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    Sounds interesting. Great descriptions and cute banner. Wondering what's going to happen next?
    May 6th, 2010 at 04:09pm
  • bob nathaniel bryar

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    This was an awesome story! The ending just about made me choke tears. I think it's because I was listening to a Rise Against song that had a sad vibe to it. I'M OFF TO READ THE SEQUEL!
    March 18th, 2010 at 10:25pm
  • Hate?Love!

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    I Love This Story So Much.
    You Are Such A Great Writer No Jokes =]
    I Cried So Much The Last Chapter, And That Like Never Happens.
    Off To Read The Sequal :)
    February 26th, 2010 at 11:56pm
  • justhannah;

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    this was really good. Onto the sequal noble steed! :D
    December 30th, 2009 at 02:28am
  • TragicWithACapitalT

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    I love this story please keep writeing :)
    December 16th, 2009 at 02:30am
  • Trisha Loves Angela

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    Depressing ending.
    Can't wait for the sequel.
    (:
    December 13th, 2009 at 04:05am
  • MyMonkeySaidSo

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    Matt's a bastard. Thought I'd get that out there now. SO SAD!!! I almost cried. =[. can't wait for the sequel
    December 13th, 2009 at 03:43am
  • Creepin'

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    I jsut read all this and cried at the end oh my god its amazing!
    I think you should post it tonight!
    <3
    December 13th, 2009 at 03:27am
  • Sailor Meranda

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    I loved it. Over all it was amazing. I loved the fight between the sisters at the end. : )
    December 13th, 2009 at 03:19am
  • melissamassacre

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    just read the last chapter...omg damn. i cant wait for the seequeel :D
    December 13th, 2009 at 02:49am
  • A_7_X

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    I cried! Its so sad that zora left for New York. that was really good.
    You should put the sequel out tonight!
    December 13th, 2009 at 02:35am
  • A_7_X

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    love it!!!
    December 13th, 2009 at 12:43am
  • melissamassacre

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    its amazing :D
    December 13th, 2009 at 12:19am
  • Becka Vengeance

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    I love this chapter, but I do have one problem, it's Valedictorian, not Vala Victorian lol. Other than that, awesome update =]
    December 13th, 2009 at 12:18am
  • NaiveDove

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    Your are so good, I cried at the end. You are so gifted, please continue the story it is so good.
    December 13th, 2009 at 12:18am
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