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  • And Im Carissa

    And Im Carissa (100)

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    I agree! Dude this story is beast! So much emotion and just reality. I like it, please continue or i will be crushed
    December 13th, 2009 at 06:28am
  • The_Pretender

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    This is a great beginning! I love the way you jump right into the story and the conflicts that Jared has at school and at work. It makes me want to read more because there is so many ways this story can go. Please continue! :) I can't wait to see more. Also, I really like the way you describe Jared's thoughts and feelings. It makes the story seem very believable and true to life. Good job!
    December 5th, 2009 at 10:18pm
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