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  • BeautifulLiar95

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    omg I HAVENT READ IT SCINCE THE ROCK CHAPTER WOW CANT WAIT TO READ THE NEXT ONE
    February 14th, 2010 at 04:43am
  • OutSpokenFreak

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    I loved it. :) the ending was amazing! xD :)

    Personally I think you should continue in......Landons P.O.V
    February 10th, 2010 at 07:46pm
  • Who me? Couldn't be!

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    Oh my god. It's over. This moment is bittersweet. I feel like some part of my heart was filled with a happy ending and then ripped away because this story is no more. :'( I LOVED IT. It had everything a good story should have and then some. I smiled, I laughed, I sobbed, I smirked. Not many people can do that these days so I commend you for your awesome job. As for the sequel...I personally don't have a preference to the POV as long as I get a sequel!
    February 9th, 2010 at 03:17am
  • Who me? Couldn't be!

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    OK, I don't know if I'm hormonal or something but reading Jack talk about Landon and call him "Boog" I almost teared up. I must be going crazy cuz that just made me smile so big. So sweet. And the end was very funny yet sweet. I just love Jack! And the dresses and jewlery are amazing! Great chapter.
    February 5th, 2010 at 11:39pm
  • Who me? Couldn't be!

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    Woah, that was intense. And very unexpected. Good job. :D Update soon.
    February 4th, 2010 at 11:01pm
  • OutSpokenFreak

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    I loved it. =]
    it was awesome!
    Can't wait for moree! :)
    February 2nd, 2010 at 11:43pm
  • OutSpokenFreak

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    ideaa timee! well, this is just a possibility, but...you should have the baby a girl, like the onne that sadly died, but maybee twins again? where they both live.. And David gets mad because they aren't his.. So he... breaks into their house, agerily? (i know theres a restraing order) and him and Jack get into a fight, and while Bella calls the cops.. He hits her? After she has the kids? or while she's preggo?.. But then Jack gets sent to the hospital, and David to Jail.. And like make it seem as if Jack's going to die.. I don't think he should, but your choice. :) anyways.. thats my idea... personally I think it suckss.. But whatever.
    February 1st, 2010 at 10:06pm
  • OutSpokenFreak

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    I'm going to be cool and comment this story, because..honestly, I have to say it's Amazing. No Lie. It was greaat! I love the plot, awsomness! and your writing is just... fantastic. I'm not even kidding! I-
    m like jealous of your writing skills! Seriously!!! Can't wait for more updates!!

    <3 Sammy:]

    ps; I'm subscribing:)
    February 1st, 2010 at 03:51am
  • Who me? Couldn't be!

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    You almost gave me a heart attack! She was leaving and driving away and I was freaking out! But then she went back and I could breathe again. Thank goodness! They are just way to awesome to not be together. And pregnant! Ah ha ha! I'm so happy! Loved this chapter...actually, LOVED the past 3! You're on a roll and as usual, I can't wait for more! Great update!
    January 28th, 2010 at 07:53pm
  • Who me? Couldn't be!

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    Oh my god! YOU READ MY MIND! I read the thing and I was thinking "Yes! David's a douche!" I am very happy indeed! And they're getting married! I'm just so excited! These last two chapters have been AWESOME! Can't wait for more!

    PS- Do my comments get annoying? I just know I love it when people comment me, even if they're the same people saying the same thing. I don't bug you right?
    January 26th, 2010 at 02:59am
  • BeautifulLiar95

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    Omg I love it...nice ring to haha I'm sooo happy
    January 25th, 2010 at 08:13pm
  • Who me? Couldn't be!

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    AHHHHHH! That was AWESOME! I can't stop grinning! Tehehehe! I loved it! Can't wait for more! LOVED the dress and ring.
    January 24th, 2010 at 05:56am
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    Oh my goodness! How can you even say that Landon's first words were a filler?! Nope, nuh-uh. Very important. And adorable. Wonderful update.
    January 20th, 2010 at 02:39am
  • BeautifulLiar95

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    I can read it now...great chapter I live the pictures...to bad she had a girl
    January 20th, 2010 at 01:43am
  • Who me? Couldn't be!

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    Hm...OK, so I'm about to talk your ear off here.

    First- I won't subscribe yet because the name of your story scares me. I LIVE for happy endings and if it's not gonna end happily, I don't like to take the time to read it. So yeah, not asking for details or anything but it will be a happy ending right?
    Second- I agree, green is hard to read.
    Third- I love the story in general. It's cute and makes me giggle. Jack is such a sweetheart and I'm practically in love with him myself. I really hope they have a kid together. I'm glad he is Landon's "daddy."
    Fourth- Landon's daddy. Ew. I know, I know. It's not right to keep a father from his child but I personally hope he screws up so he never gets to see the kid again. Does that make me evil? I just think he's in the way. It's supposed to be Kay, Jack, and Landon. Mommy, Daddy, and Baby. (Plus any additional kids they add together. :D)

    So yeah, I REALLY hope that this doesn't come across like I'm trying to control your story or tell you what to write or anything. Just my thoughts. Great job so far.
    January 19th, 2010 at 07:30am
  • BeautifulLiar95

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    Oh haha that is funny and ur welcome! Can I suggest something...the green writting is really hard to read. Just to let you know
    January 19th, 2010 at 12:13am
  • BeautifulLiar95

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    That wedding will be awkward haha watch as during the ceremony her water breaks haha
    January 18th, 2010 at 02:20am
  • BeautifulLiar95

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    Ohh wow good chapter
    January 17th, 2010 at 12:18am
  • A7X FTW

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    Awesome story! So sad the baby died :(. BTW I sunscribed!
    January 16th, 2010 at 03:48am
  • itsoundscatchy!

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    im glad she's warmed up to jack.but everytime i think of jack i think of jack barakat.is there a specific guy you had in mind for jack or can i just think of jack barakat?
    January 16th, 2010 at 03:44am