Oh my god. It's over. This moment is bittersweet. I feel like some part of my heart was filled with a happy ending and then ripped away because this story is no more. :'( I LOVED IT. It had everything a good story should have and then some. I smiled, I laughed, I sobbed, I smirked. Not many people can do that these days so I commend you for your awesome job. As for the sequel...I personally don't have a preference to the POV as long as I get a sequel!
OK, I don't know if I'm hormonal or something but reading Jack talk about Landon and call him "Boog" I almost teared up. I must be going crazy cuz that just made me smile so big. So sweet. And the end was very funny yet sweet. I just love Jack! And the dresses and jewlery are amazing! Great chapter.
ideaa timee! well, this is just a possibility, but...you should have the baby a girl, like the onne that sadly died, but maybee twins again? where they both live.. And David gets mad because they aren't his.. So he... breaks into their house, agerily? (i know theres a restraing order) and him and Jack get into a fight, and while Bella calls the cops.. He hits her? After she has the kids? or while she's preggo?.. But then Jack gets sent to the hospital, and David to Jail.. And like make it seem as if Jack's going to die.. I don't think he should, but your choice. :) anyways.. thats my idea... personally I think it suckss.. But whatever.
I'm going to be cool and comment this story, because..honestly, I have to say it's Amazing. No Lie. It was greaat! I love the plot, awsomness! and your writing is just... fantastic. I'm not even kidding! I- m like jealous of your writing skills! Seriously!!! Can't wait for more updates!!
You almost gave me a heart attack! She was leaving and driving away and I was freaking out! But then she went back and I could breathe again. Thank goodness! They are just way to awesome to not be together. And pregnant! Ah ha ha! I'm so happy! Loved this chapter...actually, LOVED the past 3! You're on a roll and as usual, I can't wait for more! Great update!
Oh my god! YOU READ MY MIND! I read the thing and I was thinking "Yes! David's a douche!" I am very happy indeed! And they're getting married! I'm just so excited! These last two chapters have been AWESOME! Can't wait for more!
PS- Do my comments get annoying? I just know I love it when people comment me, even if they're the same people saying the same thing. I don't bug you right?
First- I won't subscribe yet because the name of your story scares me. I LIVE for happy endings and if it's not gonna end happily, I don't like to take the time to read it. So yeah, not asking for details or anything but it will be a happy ending right? Second- I agree, green is hard to read. Third- I love the story in general. It's cute and makes me giggle. Jack is such a sweetheart and I'm practically in love with him myself. I really hope they have a kid together. I'm glad he is Landon's "daddy." Fourth- Landon's daddy. Ew. I know, I know. It's not right to keep a father from his child but I personally hope he screws up so he never gets to see the kid again. Does that make me evil? I just think he's in the way. It's supposed to be Kay, Jack, and Landon. Mommy, Daddy, and Baby. (Plus any additional kids they add together. :D)
So yeah, I REALLY hope that this doesn't come across like I'm trying to control your story or tell you what to write or anything. Just my thoughts. Great job so far.
im glad she's warmed up to jack.but everytime i think of jack i think of jack barakat.is there a specific guy you had in mind for jack or can i just think of jack barakat?