I read this story when you were writing it, and a few months ago I was thinking about this story and I wanted to re-read it. But I could not find it, and I was afraid you had taken it off Mibba. :/ But! I just found it again. So excited to re-read it. :P Thank you for not taking it down. :3 ♥♥
So here I am one day, none of the other stores I had subscribed to had been update and all my stuff had been checked so I began searching for a new slash to read. And then I stumbled across a familiar completed story, Plaything and remembered how great the author had written, then the thought lead to another and I knew you were bound to have another story that caught my interest. So I'm scrolling through you stories and I come across this one and I know instantly I'm going to love it.
4 hours later after having read the whole story I'm now commenting here. And psh sure it's already completed and you have countless comments but I want to tell you that this story was very sweet and of course well written. These two characters are two i will never forget and yeah it sucks that the story is and has been completed but everything comes to end and it's nice to have that feeling a completeness.
But now I'm left craving candy, preferably Gummy Bears. :)
This story is absolutely amazing. I read all of it in like, 2 hours, and I was so sad when it ended. Your an amazing writer. Well, I'm off to go check out your other stories now. XD
This is just, wow. I loved it from the first sentence to the last. You used such detail and made everything seem so real. I absolutely 100% love this. One of the best stories I've read on mibba. <3
Omg, that was an amazing story!! You're such a great writer!! I can't believe this has ended ): I'm so sad, I know you said you won't, but PLEASE MAKE A SEQUAL!! (: Thanx for Entertaining me :D xo
hmph the chapter on poptars made me relizee this WE DONT HAVE ANYMORE POPTARTS IN THE HOUSE....i seriously almost started crying but thestory is amazing but its ok ill survive with out anymore poptarts :)
Awesome.I love the imagrey, the 'celery coloured eyes' and 'mist settling over the boardwalk',paints me great pictures in my small attention span,which your stories can hold ;D
Wow!!!! I absolutely love your story. No matter what i will always remember the cuteness of this story and im soo sad i has come to an end. =( But i loved the ending and glad they are together, and yep i wont think abwt them not being together because they are soooooo meant for each other. I will continue to read anymore of your wonderful stories, my fab friend who writes incredibly. =) Take care
AW NOOOOOOOOOO!!!! ITS OVER! ITS SO SAD! :( IM GOING TO MISS THIS STORY. IT WAS SO GOOD AND I ENJOYED IT ALOT! :) I HOPE IN THE FUTURE U WRITE MORE STORIES :)