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  • reveress_ plegue

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    so awsome the best ever
    October 26th, 2010 at 03:59am
  • fictionsymphony

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    Oh my gosh i love this story lots. It was so funny although i wish it was longer.
    August 11th, 2010 at 06:44am
  • Ghastghost24

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    Please come back your story was a breath of fresh air.
    April 26th, 2010 at 12:33am
  • Ghastghost24

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    Please come back your story was a breath of fresh air.
    April 26th, 2010 at 12:33am
  • Ghastghost24

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    Ok i love this story to death no pun intended haha but i will comment everydau if i have to for you to update. We readers will always need the jimmster at this time.
    January 1st, 2010 at 11:10pm
  • NaiveDove

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    This is really good, I really need some Jimmy in this time the most. (:
    December 29th, 2009 at 11:23pm
  • XxXRaWrXxX

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    I love this story its reallly good.
    But Jimmy died yesturday :( i really wanna cry.
    I hope u continue writing this story its really reaallly reallly good
    December 29th, 2009 at 07:11pm
  • justhannah;

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    this is really good :) hope you have fun with your brother, I know how you feel, my uncle's in the army and he just got back a few months ago. Update when you're ready.
    December 26th, 2009 at 08:04pm
  • FreeMarie11

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    First of all great story :] very unique and im addicted. second of all, im so excited for you that your brothers home, when i was younge rmy dad was in the navy so i know how excited you must be :] please pass along my thanks to your brother for protecting our country overseas. its because of amazing men like him that we can live normally and without constant fear.

    Best Wishes, Adriana <3
    December 23rd, 2009 at 12:03pm
  • celiaeatsballz

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    aww ): I dont know what I want to happen.
    December 19th, 2009 at 05:02pm
  • MyMonkeySaidSo

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    Aww so sad. I hope she forgives him. Hell yeah this is good by the way
    December 14th, 2009 at 10:45pm
  • StallionDuckie6661

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    Happy holidays Sugar!
    Uh oh. Matt sure picked a wrong time to make an entrance. Poor Al and Jimmy. It was a good update Sweetie and I can't wait for more, like always!
    <33
    December 14th, 2009 at 04:55pm
  • SynergySynergy

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    i absolutely adore this story. Its wonderfully original! I love how you use Mot and Connie to influence Al's decisions. The pacing is amazing, as well. The drama that you've added in is rather intriguing and I really like how you've pretty much made Al and Jimmy's life the same as Mot and Connie's. This is one of my favorite stories right now. Pure bliss!
    December 14th, 2009 at 05:28am
  • celiaeatsballz

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    I just started reading this last night and I loveeee it!
    December 13th, 2009 at 04:41pm
  • Marissa1117

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    This is soo cute.Jimmy's like a little kid it's hilarious. Keep up the nice work. :)
    December 13th, 2009 at 04:33pm
  • StallionDuckie6661

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    Oh dear. I love Mot. He's just epic. Gotta love short shit. I love the story Sweetie!
    December 11th, 2009 at 05:17pm
  • StallionDuckie6661

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    Oh dear. I love Mot. He's just epic. Gotta love short shit. I love the story Sweetie!
    December 11th, 2009 at 05:12pm
  • Aightball

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    I, too, love Connie and Mot, lol! I have a character that sometimes pops in to give "advice" as well, so I know how seh feels!

    This was very interesting, as though it's playing out exactly like one of her books. I figure Jimmy will get caught at some point, and then it will be interesting to see what happens. She seems to be distracting him from getting the money, so perhaps she ought to remind him of his duties.
    December 11th, 2009 at 04:11pm
  • StallionDuckie6661

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    I love Connie and Mot. They're just perfect, lol. Wow Brian..... I could see him doing that to someone randomly...
    I love the story so far Sweetheart!
    I can't wait for more!
    December 6th, 2009 at 10:15pm
  • Skarsgard

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    This is so different.
    In a good way of course.

    Update soon.

    :]
    December 6th, 2009 at 04:33pm